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moon shies away clouds rain burst temper tantrum ~ kitten meowing 12/27/2023

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/2/2024 2:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/2/2024 2:34:00 AM

As promised I started again. Lovely poetry. Have a Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2023 10:24:00 AM

Sweet with kitty vs. the storm!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2023 12:39:00 PM

I loved reading your lovely Haiku write. Great Pictures... "Happy New Year 2024" .................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2023 11:50:00 AM

I like the snapshot of the kitten which looks as if she is surrounded by light or lightning. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2023 6:07:00 AM

oh the vivid imagery is awesome.. nice to see you posting and I hope you are well my friend..

Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2023 8:54:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment. Yes, I am ok. Hope you are doing well.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/28/2023 2:53:00 AM

How descriptively creative is this haiku dear eve: and I absolutely love the picture you’ve used too and the thunderstorm, i think i am like the moon, i shy away too when theres one, especially thunderstorms, i get really scared. I love how picturesque this is and how you’ve ended it with kitten meowing. Im learning more about haiku writing and i see yours is done in sheer poetic perfection, sending you light always

Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2023 8:56:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Ink. I too am one that thunderstorms scare me. Why? I don't know, but have always had a fever, where others love it.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/27/2023 10:37:00 PM

Oh that explains a thunderstruck environment when the moon shies away and omen surrounds! Such a creative write this is, dear Eve.. A vividly intriguing ambience you've created with few words.. An amazing haiku, as always.. Sending you love & light, keep shining and writing ~

Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful compliment, Hiya. Many blessings to you

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/27/2023 10:20:00 PM

lovely, have a nce day

Eve Roper
Date: 12/28/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank you , Yann. Hugs Eve