Hope

The quagmire of the heart has many gems in mud:
Crocus, water lilies, and the mineral of blood
Life and faith for a better day
When we shall say again everything is good. 
Love ever adorns the twinkle of the stars,
And all things are possible because we believe
Though seasons change and the heart deceives.
Earth wears our love like a cloak
And we walk naked in the mirage of light
Two strangers passing through each other
Oblivious to the tiger I keep out of sight.

But O the citadels that poets here write
Makes a man want to stay forever
With one log to mesmerize the tiger tonight -
Spring is a new poem everywhere
Making us older with passing time
From naked trees spring grows fresh again
And this eternity in our hearts will not fade
The hill hides eternity over the glade.
O hear me, the tiger is only an enemy of the eye
Truth is the sunshine of the soul
Hope epitomize in the brevity of truth flies like a swan,
One feather is all I need for wings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Great metaphorical language used in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
Semeniuk Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:24 AM
"and this eternity in our hearts will not fade".. love that line!..the whole poem is great, as expected with your writing!..
Culverhouse Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 6:19 AM
I will have to watch out for the tiger!! :) enjoyed!! Thank you so much for your wonderful comments today! You made my weekend!!
Foster Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 6:00 PM
I find free verse difficult to write and, sometimes to hard read, but, this work flowed so smoothly it was a pleasure. well written L'nass. thank you for your lovely remarks on my 'reflections'...cheers Margaret
Knop Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Beautiful words, L'nass! I especially enjoyed reading the last passage!...And thank you for your comment...Hava a Happy Easter!...Gert
Dufresne Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:00 PM
Still this eternity in our hearts is the essence of eternity placed in Eternity Himself. Like Daver said, L'nass --lots of great lines -thank you for your welcome comments- Robert
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 4:39 PM
Another beauty from you, L'nass..."spring is a new poem everywhere".... oh your words are so pure! YOU DO have Wings!! ~
Ryerson Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Good stuff here, L'nass!...the last line pretty much sums it up for me - Tim
Segal Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:19 AM
My dear friend, as ever you too are a joy and rays of sunshine to read, thank you so much fur your wonderful comments, love always, Simone
Shango Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:12 AM
This did not begin as a poem, but instead I commented on someone else poems using these lines, and then stringed them together for this write. I felt the muse was trying to speak, but I was not listening. Enjoy!
Gorelick Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 7:02 AM
This is a beauty..I love the reference to the "tiger tonight"..you understand. Thank you for your recent comments..they mean so much to me. BG
Austin Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 6:01 AM
LOve this - "Spring is a new poem everywhere." Lots of fine lines. I also write books - novels. I'm editing one right now and, like your problem, it is taking up most of my time. Love, daver
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