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Hope

slowly it unravels strings falling apart going this way and that such a multitude of colors before me yarn falling to and fro surrounding this form twisting slowly round this corpse such a wonderous sight before my dim eyes slowly, it drifts away away from my shaking hands and my aching heart like snow it drifts ..like snow... lazily, it expands into the twilight filling the dark corners in front with fleeting glimpses of beauty and then is gone

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Date: 3/14/2010 10:20:00 PM
You have talent my friend. some lovely phrases in this one. BG Try Free Verse instead of I dont know.
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:19:00 PM
You have talent my friend. some lovely phrases in this one. BG
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