Hope

Let it like an eagle swoop on me,
I'm just a lonely swallow
scared and barely born.

I welcome death with all its pains,
As sundry pains become so excruciating.
Still in whatever form it may wish to take
I know I can hardly bear more.
All agonizing, throbbing, and vexatious.
Piercing stabs of affliction vibrate
In and around my entire body.
Oh that I would rid this misery,
This quivering of bones that feel
Like boiling water slowly dripping
On my weakest corporeal parts.
Death appears not! Oh well, who cares?
I’ll suffer the slings of torture
Hoping my painkillers would do their job.
Tomorrow is another day.
The pain will pass,
who knows the sun may shine again,
A new leaf, a fresh rose, a new love
Therefore, with beacons of light, I’m sure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Proxenos Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:32 PM
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE, BUT WHAT WE DO WITHOUT YOU Victor. YOU ARE DESTINED TO ENTHRALL US us with your outstanding poetry Victor my friend. Hugs Jennifer
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June 14, 2026 at 12:31 PM
ANOTHER MASTERPIECE, BUT WHAT WE DO WITHOUT YOU Victor. YOU ARE DESTINED TO ENTHRALL US us with your outstanding poetry Victor my friend. Hugs Jennifer
Bayles Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 7:20 AM
Such suffering, but hope is found. I like the first stanza, how it sets up the poem.
George Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:42 AM
With age our body and bones weaken. On somedays, there can be excruciating pain. But some days are good. Hope better days will come. This hope helps us pull through life. Well presented.
Nicole Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 7:58 PM
Dear Victor, I understand there's pain and moments feel unbearable at times. I wish I could make it go away, especially if you are going through this. The sun is shining on you, my dear friend. You're in my thoughts and my prayers. Hugs and blessings. ~ Brandy
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 2:37 PM
sorry for your suffering, dear Victor. I appreciate your perspective and strength. Blessings, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Endurance of suffering ...who knows the sun may shine again, A new leaf, a fresh rose, a new love
Daniel Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:57 AM
Hope this is fictional, Victor, I like how you ended this one positively:)
Buehler Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 8:11 PM
Hope is a powerful emotion, and I love the last four lines of your awesome story. Hope you are well, dear Victor.
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:18 PM
The less life feels good to us the more we may hope for deaths release. Hope you are not suffering this terrible much. This is great descriptive writing
Goldsmith Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 12:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Hope" write. I hope it is just a write. Are you OK??? Great ending with "Hope" in it. Have a blessed/lovely day writing away...........
Poet Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:53 AM
Emotional states are diverse and complicated, alternating between optimism, despair, and concern. Life might be tough at times, but we must remain optimistic. I hope you are well, Victor.
Winter Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 7:51 AM
Hope is a must in life. I hope everyday but alas hope can be sad sometimes. Your writing style is brilliant my friend. Best, Anne
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 5:20 AM
Whoa!! Now I'm concerned about you. Is this based on how you are feeling right now? If so, I hope the pain gets better and you feel much better. If just work, well, a very emotive and expressive one. Way to go. I always have hope that tomorrow all will be better. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. Sara K.
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 4:07 AM
- The emotions are many and complex, and alternate between hope and despair and anxiety... - "Memento mori" – "remember that you will die" ... This does not sound so familiar to people of our time, Victor :) - Hope everything is well with you :) - hugs
Smith  Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 3:03 AM
A tear jurker, but still hope.
Cunningham Avatar
June 8, 2026 at 2:06 AM
Life's path can be sometimes be a difficult one to tread but we must never give up on hope. Hope you're keeping well Victor. Tom
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