Hope

Lightly blinking in my soul,
In affront of lost control.
In the depths, the beacon calls.
From it's lips, my name falls
Against my fiber, hand held out.
Gently take my shaking doubt.
Peace at last be still my soul.
Hope encompass, my heart console.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Spence Sr Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 4:19 PM
I like the flow of this poem and the imagery. The rhyming sequence is also excellent. The last couplet is really icing on the cake. Great job! ~Joseph
Shahwan Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:09 AM
Very thrilling. Beautiful flow of words... poetess.
Orozco Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful write! Jeremiah
Cantu Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Hope indeed has some sort of propperty that causes the dead to rise and walk in the garden; perhaps hope is the prove of how reachable everything is, even what seems to be completely gone; thanks for sharing!!=D I like the warmth of this nice poem=D=D
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