Hop Aboard

Plunge in these blankets,
Cannonball into this bed
And splash in my sheets

passionsenryu

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Guzzi

January 6, 2013 at 6:09 PM

Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Rollo West

January 6, 2013 at 6:51 PM

Hi Debbie, Thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

December 25, 2012 at 7:37 PM

glad to see this on the winners list. You can't go wrong with hardly any of your haiku or senryu as entries in a contest. Congrats!

Rollo West

December 25, 2012 at 9:42 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you for stopping by and the congrats. Rollo

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2012 at 5:40 AM

Good morning, Rollo,, A nice warm congratulations in Susan's "any new 12 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

Rollo West

December 24, 2012 at 11:22 AM

Hi Linda, thank you so much for the congrats and also for your wishes for the holidays, and the same to you my friend. Rollo

Seren Roberts

December 23, 2012 at 2:01 PM

Well done Rollo....Seren

Rollo West

December 23, 2012 at 2:03 PM

Hi Seren, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 23, 2012 at 1:34 PM

Congratulations Rollo love this one xx

Rollo West

December 23, 2012 at 1:35 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Andrea Dietrich

December 20, 2012 at 6:32 PM

rollo, you have a brilliant mind for these short poetry forms. I have to go see if I have you on my fave poet list yet!!

Rollo West

December 20, 2012 at 8:40 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much my friend for your great comments about my work. Rollo

Richard Lamoureux

December 20, 2012 at 11:22 AM

This is wet and wild Rollo. Very creative.

Rollo West

December 20, 2012 at 11:40 AM

Hi Richard, thank you so much for your great comment. Rollo

Harry Horsman

December 19, 2012 at 2:58 PM

something to really think about here,, like this Rollo

Rollo West

December 19, 2012 at 3:05 PM

Hello Harry, thank for stopping by and your comment. Rollo

Russell Sivey

December 19, 2012 at 2:58 PM

You paint the prettiest picture with this incredible write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and enlightening poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Rollo West

December 19, 2012 at 3:06 PM

Hi Russell, thank you so much my friend for your commenting. Rollo