Sotto Poet Poet Etheree

Hooray I Am Back

A
dash on
excitement
tender passion
warm my leaden mind;
lavish,  pungent perfumes
drift thru torn, intimate halls;
chuckling from the cookhouse table,
our constant, unique, only junction,
drown me amorously…and I am near!

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Bill Baker May 29, 2022 at 12:43 AM I like the form of this poem for going back through the paths we've traveled. Made me think, that's a good thing. :-) Bill

Beryl Edmonds May 28, 2022 at 6:03 PM A beautiful Etheree poem Sotto, it’s good to go back in time and view the memories stored in one’s mind… Belle

Sara Kendrick May 28, 2022 at 11:43 AM Glad you are back. This form makes a very nice pyramid. I enjoyed reading your work. Your visits always inspire me. Thanks, Sara

Vijay Pandit May 28, 2022 at 4:25 AM Excitement and passion resonate--a poem of longing.

Demetrios Trifiatis May 28, 2022 at 3:35 AM What a marvelous, Etheree, my dearest, Lasaad. It is competing the grace of a Pyramid! Blessings!