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Hooray For Autumn

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We raised our sights in the autumn season, brilliant and vivacious shades, full of life. Vivid crimson, scarlet, rust, and yellow rife, The maple trees in the grove praised the region. Getting a clear grasp of the near atmosphere, hear the stones beneath our feet squish and shift. Consider the dust piles that our shoes drift, Feel the brisk breeze tickling our hair, yet each spear. The autumn leaves on the trees had fallen, During the seasons, I am lured by the radiant sight. The harvest was plentiful, a summer delight, Pumpkins, squash, and yams were then sullen. Birds expecting winter fly over a deep blue sky, For the rest of the fall, the butterfly urges you to stay. Bonfires and ethereal smoke swamped the air and piney fragrance with a dash of seasonal flair. Pause, sight, the river flanked by a large stone, toward green and withering vetch stalks. Stay close to increasing beating whacks, Azure Creek has a gentle, placid tone. Squirrels brace for fall by saving nuts and seeds, They relish crisp fall days but dread winters. and spread an abundance of lusty splinters. Come jog with me, which allows clean air to renew yields.
2nd Place Contest Winner Written: December 09, 2022 Still-Life Autumn Scene Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 7/24/2023 11:10:00 AM
A rollicking tribute to Autumn my friend. So vivacious and lively Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 12/29/2022 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. WOW!!! What a great picture. I would love to have it. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:09:00 PM
Great work as usual. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2022 7:46:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, once again to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:51:00 PM
Lasaad, you set a wonderful scene and walked me there. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Date: 12/9/2022 11:13:00 PM
Brilliant. I love your autumn scenes. But I wish we were in Spring.
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Date: 12/9/2022 8:24:00 PM
What a splendid array of lovely autumn scenes. To enjoy these bewitching sights, I feel like joining you in your jogging ! All the best my friend.
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Date: 12/9/2022 7:04:00 PM
So lush with imagery, pulled me into the autumnal landscape! Lines you set down for my imagination to harvest. A vibrant penning! Blessings, sally
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Date: 12/9/2022 12:33:00 PM
Your poem-- joyous in realm of autumn. Excellent imagery, my friend. Best to you.
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Date: 12/9/2022 11:04:00 AM
Lasaad, this is so highlights the glory of autumn with brilliant colors, busy squirrels, abundant nuts and seeds and crisp days. It is so majestic in tone! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for these late autumn days!
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Date: 12/9/2022 10:45:00 AM
- Beautifully described autumn in your poem, Las :) - Nature prepares for winter - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/9/2022 10:31:00 AM
Autumn's glorification is your poem, my dearest, Lasaad. An Ode to nature's beauty perfectly painted by your poetic pen! Be blessed!
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