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Honorably Patted On the Head

Like a good little puppy Dance a dance, bark on command Play the game Most honorable friend

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 4:35:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your light poetry this morning Doris. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

Danny Nunn

Date: 4/18/2010 8:20:00 PM

Sounds like some people I know...good write...On Voodoo...Devil worshipers not gypsies, big difference Danny

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2010 4:42:00 PM

Interesting write. Don't think that I would want to be a friend to that person that wanted me to jump through hoops for them...Mom

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2010 12:48:00 PM

I like it alot Doris, ruff ruff- A snap with the finger. Nice one,P.D.

Donal Mahoney

Date: 4/18/2010 12:07:00 PM

"Cops and Robbers"is indeed gross if you read it literally like a news report. But if it is a symbolic representation of an emotional wound maybe it works. I don't write a lot of happy pap. There seems to be a surfeit of that around.