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Honorably Patted On the Head

Like a good little puppy
Dance a dance, bark on command
Play the game
Most honorable friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 4:35 AM
It was a pleasure to read your light poetry this morning Doris. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
Nunn Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:20 PM
Sounds like some people I know...good write...On Voodoo...Devil worshipers not gypsies, big difference Danny
Kendrick Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Interesting write. Don't think that I would want to be a friend to that person that wanted me to jump through hoops for them...Mom
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April 18, 2010 at 12:48 PM
I like it alot Doris, ruff ruff- A snap with the finger. Nice one,P.D.
Mahoney Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 12:07 PM
"Cops and Robbers"is indeed gross if you read it literally like a news report. But if it is a symbolic representation of an emotional wound maybe it works. I don't write a lot of happy pap. There seems to be a surfeit of that around.
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