Honorable Mention

On entering this contest I have to admit
The fame it will bring me when I push "submit"
Is all that I'm after -  my name in bright lights
The kind of attention I earned with my writes.

I used to get noticed for walking in late
To school, then to jobs, and even for dates
My family picked up on my one loud defect
And thought they could fix me - no disrespect.

They told me that dinner would be served at five
When seven was really the time to arrive
Two hours they gave me to help cure the curse
But of course I found out and the problem got worse.

Right now I'm supposed to be cleaning my room
Instead, I am writing, ignoring the broom
My shrink says that tardiness is a cry for attention
I'll clean my room later for an honorable mention.
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Lacey Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 1:15 PM
cute poem :)
Kurth Avatar
September 4, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Karen, this poem made me smile. Fun to read - maybe not so fun for the family! Krista
Harrison Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on your win. I really enjoyed this poem
Schroeder Avatar
June 15, 2009 at 10:15 PM
very clever and a well deserved mention
Dalby Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 2:13 AM
Great poem, love it. JD http://readmypoetrynow.blogspot.com/
Fish Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 11:15 AM
OOKKAAAYYY... I wasn't going to say anything because I thought I was being stupid and childish, but I still have the $50 check for placing in a contest that I entered here about four years ago, in 2005. Thanks you made me feel almost normal. he!he! Another good-un... <><
Buys Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 7:45 AM
I smiled when I originally read this and I am still smiling on rereading it. So very well done. Regards Heidie
Schroeder Avatar
June 7, 2009 at 4:49 AM
I just found this site, only tonight. Your poem is clever, I could only grin. I can't wait for my own to begin.
Peranteau Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Karen,..no,..no way girly ! Get to that room wit dat broom ! Oh Ok,..just this once,..............CONGRATULATIONS KAREN !!!! This was fun ty,..many more to ya !! james
Christian Avatar
June 5, 2009 at 6:58 AM
wow, a great poem congrats on your win, you deserve an honorable meantion for this poem its great, God bless you from diane
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 4:25 PM
Congrats Karen. God Bless. Vince
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations on your win Karen. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations Karen on your most clever and excellent win! Love, Shar
Tugaff Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 12:52 AM
It makes me smile. I love it. Congratulations on this poem being featured and for the win. Ernilando
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May 31, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest Karen. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:25 PM
As part of the tardiness committee, I give you my heartfelt congrats on placing. Keep doing what you're doing. :-)
Adeite Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 9:35 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
Richards Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 6:45 AM
Such a clever poem, and so well deserving a win in the contest! Hearty congratulations!!
Scott Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 5:41 AM
I love this poem Karen! Congrats on your win!
Santiago Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 1:21 AM
Karen, my congratulations to you on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto
Jordan Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Karen congratulations on placing in the soup's contest, Gd Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Karen, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Yes, yes, yes ... LOL wonderful here, Karen ... you definitely have my vote ... smile ... what a great write that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... you're on your way ... good luck and once again, congratulations!!
Moreno Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 12:30 AM
Amazing work, the flow, flowed nicely...Raul
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