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Honorable death

when it comes night time, i sit with my rifle at my side and wonder how many lives i have affected with one bullet at a time.. i wonder why we where ever put on the earth, but only to breathe another breath as another one is taken away...... i dread for the morning air to come... to see the faces of those who will become the past but all i can do is life for the misery it truly has given all i can do is think of the quote " if i live... i will kill you ... if i die you are forgiven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 2:58:00 AM
if you are alive, write some more damn POEMS!
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:33:00 AM
I am not a huge reader...but I do like reading stuff like this...So you got more or what?
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:26:00 PM
Geez, where did that quote come from at the end, Jacob? Very thought-provoking. I think I would consider your verse style to be "Narrative" as your poems tell gripping stories. Well done! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:16:00 PM
jacob, what a poem... and expression.,,,, wow! wow! what a quote to think of.. you are xool... have a nice one,..Linda
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:17:00 PM
Powerful!
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:05:00 PM
wow! so much emotion. I love it.
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