Honor

A beautiful word, like sex 
on stick and bears no guilt, 
is the sure epitome of 
my blood and not of my belly

Not to omit the brevity 
of its syllable, oft sounding on 
my breath, I till it not only 
when spring comes, but in winter too

Those who care and speak 
what they think of 
my epitome makes me breathe 
life’s expectation easier

I supervise that it sways elegantly, 
not to impress my ego, nor to roughen lives, 
but to comfort  palms with skin, oh like mine, 
keeled by handshakes of psychotropic war
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ganesh S Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Nice usage of words, well constructed.
Strand Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 2:28 AM
Thank you for your kind words today Ernesto and for your observation(another senior moment)which I have corrected .Thanks.Have a good day.Rgds Brian
Spence Sr Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 1:50 PM
This is wonderful. I like how the lines jump and how the symbology varies. The enjambment is excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
Poe Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 7:44 PM
i feel very lost. maybe you can explain. for some reason i am getting some kind of a struggle going on. but for some reason it has captured my attention.
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Ok poem 2 and still no understanding..onward Light & Love Debbie
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