Paloma P Poet Imagism

Honeysuckle and Cardamon Spice Reminisces

Cognac & Brandy recollections,
   sublime warmth 'tween
        smoky exhaled vapors,
wisps of  Madagascar aromatics 
       & blazes of Autumn firesides
    amidst a French Château fantasy,
  dipped in honeysuckle reminisces 
      of cardamom spice and the pungent
         zest of once upon twilit legends

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Jan Allison October 15, 2016 at 3:48 PM Your imagery is superb Paloma I can picture the scene so vividly in my head. This really appeals to all the senses:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Carrie Richards October 14, 2016 at 2:40 PM I love the choices you make....you write poetry that is 'out of the box'.....very enjoyable !!

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2016 at 8:16 PM I like SEeker's yummy comment. It IS a delicious mixture of delightful words! Paloma P October 14, 2016 at 10:01 AM Thanks so much Andrea!

Daniel Turner October 13, 2016 at 11:34 AM I can feel the warmth and hear the crackling of burning wood. Great imagery! Just wonderful, Paloma. Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:44 PM Best compliment to know you 'felt' it, thanks Daniel!

Paul Callus October 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM Great imagery which appeals to the senses, Paloma! Now I'm bathing in the beauty of another delightful offering of yours. You're on a high:) Regards // paul Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:43 PM Wow, thanks for kind words Paul, much appreciated!

Robert Warlov October 13, 2016 at 10:45 AM Fancy a fancy's exhalation- Serene, like a hammock's cradle rocking Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:43 PM That sounds comforting. Thank you.

DM Babbit October 13, 2016 at 10:18 AM Beautiful images and scents come alive. Nice write P. Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:42 PM Nice of you to say DM, thank you.

Chris Green October 13, 2016 at 8:33 AM If this isn't an autumn dream, I don't know what is. Your phrasing is woven in this poem like a beautiful warm multi-colored blanket, perfect for wrapping up in on a chilly day. Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:41 PM Coming from you, the master romanticist, that means a lot Chris, thank you.

Kim Rodrigues October 13, 2016 at 7:38 AM Delightful, Paloma! You fill the senses! Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:40 PM Thanks very much Kim!

Tim Smith October 13, 2016 at 7:32 AM You paint a lovely scene Paloma. I can picture a love story taking place in front of the fire. Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:39 PM Good to know, thanks Tim.