Honeymoon Destination

Niagara Falls releases thunderous roar
Delighted honeymooners spring to take the tour
A double rainbow rises overhead



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:07 PM
I saw the Falls several years ago and all's I could think of was people who used to go over the Falls in a barrel...a Wonderful nature haiku Line!~Che :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:10 AM
I hope you saw the rainbows too, Cheryl.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 2:46 PM
that would be so cool to see this on one's honeymoon!
Gauthier Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.
Gentile Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 8:15 AM
This one really spoke to me, Line Just love it xxoo Happy Tuesday xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Mike.
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 2:44 AM
oh I so want to visit Line, a gem of a haiku:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 6:42 AM
So it's on your bucket list. You have to go to the Canadian side or both to compare, don't take my word for it. But those rainbows are actually at the bottom of the falls!! Thanks for your visit and comment, Jan. Bon voyage.
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