Honeymoon

Soon we shall merge
Blue moon shall witness
Kisses that bloom like roses red
planting babies in womb
Romantic antic of my groom 








11/8/2021
SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL 5 LINE RHYME CONTEST
SPONSOR CHARLES MESSINA
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Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:12 PM
this is so cute, but let's hope not too many babies get planted at once in the womb. haha!!
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Lol. Twins run in our family. Thanks for reading.
Horsman Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Different yet, yes a wonderful Honeymoon, the poetry wonderful too!
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:06 PM
Thanks Harry. I was surprised it placed.
Pandit Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 5:22 AM
Delightful and romantic. Congrats on your win, Karen.
Jones Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Vijay thank you!
George Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 8:45 PM
Lovely write ! Congratulations on your win Karen !
Jones Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Valsa thanks!
Mcconnell Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Lovely piece Karen with such delightful wording and congrats on your win. Blessings, Gordon
Jones Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Gordon I appreciate your kind compliment. Thanks.
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 5:30 PM
This is just delightful, Karen! Congratulations on your win. :)
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Thank you Evelyn!
Roper Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Very good verse , Karen, congratulations in Charles contest.
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Aw thank you Eve.
Messina Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Beautifully written, Karen. The joys of birth...lovely! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie
Jones Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Wow Thanks so much for the opportunity Charles.
Canerdy Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Lovely, expressive piece, Karen. Janice
Jones Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Thanks Janice!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 9:06 AM
It is God's reward to receive a baby.
Jones Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Agreed. Thanks for reading.
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