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Honeyed

The fresh scent of April is in the air; a garden wedding and their sweet smiles bloom. The sun drops honey from the sky so fair. Soon to come is their honeymoon. Six nights as warm as soft cashmere now loom for the newlyweds, who are prepared to share their bliss forevermore. The bride and groom with fervent honeyed words their love declare. Nov. 11, 2019

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Date: 11/13/2019 9:20:00 AM
Love this line: “The sun drops honey from the sky so fair.” Never thought of the sun dropping honey...beautiful!
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Date: 11/13/2019 8:31:00 AM
Sweet poem! Love is in the air this winter. Saw a concert at Carnagie Hall last night - 180 years of Central Synagogue - the rabbi - who is a Korean woman - sang Over the Rainbow! Please comment on my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:05:00 PM
Excellent flip of rhymes! I like it very much.
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:55:00 PM
My son had a wedding on the 11th of October in my backyard too.
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:58:00 AM
I wonder if the honeymooners would do me a favor by telling the truth about their first honeyed words in bed? ...April is the cruelest month at least for the easterners. Love Andie.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/12/2019 3:54:00 PM
I doubt they could. this is pure fantasy!!
Date: 11/12/2019 6:31:00 AM
Love and honey-- a sweet write, Andrea.
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Date: 11/12/2019 4:08:00 AM
This is beautiful Andrea :-) x
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Date: 11/11/2019 8:05:00 PM
April is a wonderful time to get married, You describe the scene so well while setting us up for a wonderful read, thanks Andrea, have a good night xo
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Date: 11/11/2019 7:11:00 PM
I liked this one. Nice job Andrea. You must be in the warmer climate. its freezing here in the states. well at least in Nebraska 10 degrees now. Thanks for sharing this
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