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Honey To a Sting

by Michael J. Falotico
inspired by Dr. Ram's "Love XVII"


                                                       lady bumblebee..
                                            tastes of honey all throughout..
                                               wrong words, feel the sting..

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

April 29, 2011 at 1:38 AM

7 ~JSL

Carrie Richards

April 10, 2011 at 2:43 PM

I'm sure he was happy to inspire you!! Well done!!

Deb Wilson

April 10, 2011 at 1:45 PM

yes words can surely sting..well done Michael..greatly inspired! love,Deb

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2011 at 1:19 PM

oh, sorry, I see now what you meant. You were just giving him credit for one of his poems inspiring you. that's awesome!

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2011 at 1:16 PM

ooooh, this is GOOD. feel the sting. Great ending, Michael. New contest, huh? This one I gotta check out for sure.

Wilma Neels

April 10, 2011 at 12:55 PM

what a great haiku Michael, quite thought provoking as well. Hope your weekend is going great.. Luv Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

April 10, 2011 at 12:47 PM

Oh, you got that right, Michael. No matter how sweet some people seem to be, their harsh words can often sting. Now go and buy those Godiva chocolates for your wife -- as long as she's not on a diet. I actually did not buy them, but was very tempted. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 10, 2011 at 10:46 AM

Wow and Wow again.. wrong words ...feel the sting.. speaking from experience no doubt my White Knight as your "Sweetheart" and Jersey Girl also has ... amazing inspiration from Dr. Ram ..a premier poet on P.S. and great friend so loyal ... wise words from both men to ingest for life..luv.. your Jersey Girl in wise word mode luv..forever and always... thankxx for your sweet blog comments ...