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Honey Paradise

honey paradise 
                                   bees twirl around one by one
                                       sings by flapping wings

                                           thronged unitedly
                                       protect their generation
                                      respects queen's kingdom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/26/2015 10:53:00 AM
I can see it, B, what the twin haiku talks about. They are really very protective of their queen and their kingdom. All busy. A 7. Kim :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 1:10:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by on my poem and for your A7. Loved always,bl
Date: 4/26/2015 8:44:00 AM
A beautiful string of Haiku BL - wonderful imagery a really royal write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem and for your 7. Loved always,bl
Date: 4/26/2015 3:47:00 AM
Beautiful haiku...
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 4:07:00 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for saying the haiku beautiful. Loved always,bl

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