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Honey Paradise

honey paradise bees twirl around one by one sings by flapping wings thronged unitedly protect their generation respects queen's kingdom

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Kp Nunez

Date: 4/26/2015 10:53:00 AM

I can see it, B, what the twin haiku talks about. They are really very protective of their queen and their kingdom. All busy. A 7. Kim :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by on my poem and for your A7. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2015 8:44:00 AM

A beautiful string of Haiku BL - wonderful imagery a really royal write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 1:08:00 PM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem and for your 7. Loved always,bl

Nandita Das

Date: 4/26/2015 3:47:00 AM

Beautiful haiku...

Bl Devnath
Date: 4/26/2015 4:07:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for saying the haiku beautiful. Loved always,bl