Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Honey Paradise

honey paradise 
                                   bees twirl around one by one
                                       sings by flapping wings

                                           thronged unitedly
                                       protect their generation
                                      respects queen's kingdom

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Kp Nunez April 26, 2015 at 10:53 AM I can see it, B, what the twin haiku talks about. They are really very protective of their queen and their kingdom. All busy. A 7. Kim :) Bl Devnath April 26, 2015 at 1:10 PM Thanks for stopping by on my poem and for your A7. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison April 26, 2015 at 8:44 AM A beautiful string of Haiku BL - wonderful imagery a really royal write:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Bl Devnath April 26, 2015 at 1:08 PM Thanks a lot my lovely friend for stopping by on my poem and for your 7. Loved always,bl

Nandita Das April 26, 2015 at 3:47 AM Beautiful haiku... Bl Devnath April 26, 2015 at 4:07 AM Thanks my lovely friend for saying the haiku beautiful. Loved always,bl