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Honey Bee

lawn mowers humming

above a yellow flower. . . 

a hovering bee


Date Written: March 15, 2019

Contest: 'Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku-' 

Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Richard Lamoureux

July 6, 2019 at 12:28 AM

Perfect imagery!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 29, 2019 at 6:37 PM

I can really picture this Andrea

Constance La France

March 18, 2019 at 11:01 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku ~

Warren Doll

March 18, 2019 at 8:43 AM

Andrea, back to congratulate you on your win~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

March 18, 2019 at 4:30 AM

I'm buzzing back with congratulations Andrea. Tom.

Ann Gilmour

March 17, 2019 at 6:50 PM

Such a glorious summer scene your Haiku evokes Andrea, so many congrats on your win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tania Kitchin

March 17, 2019 at 6:38 PM

Lovely imagery, I just just smell the fresh cut grass while watching a large bumble bee, congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 3:10 PM

- Always work ... a busy day for the bees - Lovely haiku, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

March 17, 2019 at 11:16 AM

A very clever Haiku Andrea - I have never tried writing one yet. Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 16, 2019 at 10:49 AM

Love the image of the bee, Andrea, and can almost smell the freshly mowed grass. Surely a winner! Hugs, carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

March 16, 2019 at 10:44 AM

A wonderful warm summer picture you have painted. BG

Warren Doll

March 16, 2019 at 8:07 AM

Great imagery. Can't wait for summer. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

March 16, 2019 at 4:33 AM

I think we were both thinking of those hot summer days relaxing in the garden with butterflies and bees. Lovely image Andrea. Good luck. Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

March 16, 2019 at 2:10 AM

Wow! This one is exactly what I was thinking, but of course you beat me to the right words....ha! Nice one for sure.

Alexis Y.

March 16, 2019 at 12:54 AM

Hi Andrea, What a good haiku for the contest. Great imagery and content. I watch bees from a far! Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier

March 15, 2019 at 11:45 PM

Delightful... sounds of summer.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 15, 2019 at 10:09 PM

Oh I can't wait, oh, well, maybe with some earplugs... ;) xomo! Sweet ink. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Joseph May

March 15, 2019 at 9:06 PM

Ahh, the sounds and colors of spring...wonderful 'ku Andre...

Frederic Parker

March 15, 2019 at 9:02 PM

having just mowed my lawn tonight this one strikes a cord...good luck

Matthew Anish

March 15, 2019 at 8:42 PM

Sweet haiku! I go to a coffee and tea shop in my area and they have a notebook there - I wrote a haiku there today! People say I am hogging up the book! I just sent out an article on San Francisco for which I will get paid $50! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

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