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Honey Bee

lawn mowers humming above a yellow flower. . . a hovering bee Date Written: March 15, 2019 Contest: 'Writing Challenge 2, March 2019 - Haiku-' Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/6/2019 12:28:00 AM

Perfect imagery!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/29/2019 6:37:00 PM

I can really picture this Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 11:01:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku ~

Warren Doll

Date: 3/18/2019 8:43:00 AM

Andrea, back to congratulate you on your win~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/18/2019 4:30:00 AM

I'm buzzing back with congratulations Andrea. Tom.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/17/2019 7:41:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, of a simple nature scene. Congratulations Andrea!

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/17/2019 6:50:00 PM

Such a glorious summer scene your Haiku evokes Andrea, so many congrats on your win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2019 6:38:00 PM

Lovely imagery, I just just smell the fresh cut grass while watching a large bumble bee, congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 3:10:00 PM

- Always work ... a busy day for the bees - Lovely haiku, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/17/2019 11:16:00 AM

A very clever Haiku Andrea - I have never tried writing one yet. Good luck in the contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2019 10:49:00 AM

Love the image of the bee, Andrea, and can almost smell the freshly mowed grass. Surely a winner! Hugs, carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/16/2019 10:44:00 AM

A wonderful warm summer picture you have painted. BG

Warren Doll

Date: 3/16/2019 8:07:00 AM

Great imagery. Can't wait for summer. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/16/2019 4:33:00 AM

I think we were both thinking of those hot summer days relaxing in the garden with butterflies and bees. Lovely image Andrea. Good luck. Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/16/2019 2:10:00 AM

Wow! This one is exactly what I was thinking, but of course you beat me to the right words....ha! Nice one for sure.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2019 12:54:00 AM

Hi Andrea, What a good haiku for the contest. Great imagery and content. I watch bees from a far! Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/15/2019 11:45:00 PM

Delightful... sounds of summer.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/15/2019 10:09:00 PM

Oh I can't wait, oh, well, maybe with some earplugs... ;) xomo! Sweet ink. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Joseph May

Date: 3/15/2019 9:06:00 PM

Ahh, the sounds and colors of spring...wonderful 'ku Andre...

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/15/2019 9:02:00 PM

having just mowed my lawn tonight this one strikes a cord...good luck

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/15/2019 8:42:00 PM

Sweet haiku! I go to a coffee and tea shop in my area and they have a notebook there - I wrote a haiku there today! People say I am hogging up the book! I just sent out an article on San Francisco for which I will get paid $50! Peace & Love Matthew Anish