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Remember the blue evening sky but the dinner wasn't ready...........yet Remember how glued the phone was to............................................you Their attention stole you from me, because of them you were..........still You texted and sexted back to back, to satisfy their..........................want And there I sat watching, pretending to be happy, all okay with..........me The nyama choma came, and many cheers of beers.............................to Glitter our moment, but after that day I promised not to.......................call You my honey, because I was just a number, I didn't mean much to.....you Weird, surprising and unfortunate that you still beg me to call you.....honey Sponsor HGarvey Daniel Esquire Contest Name " End Line Word " nyama choma - roasted meat

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Date: 8/7/2015 4:11:00 AM
I never knew that this 'end line word' little business could beget an opus of this enviable quality. Originality and skill are evident throughout...Ending in lines that qualify the theme and title. There's commendable improvement in your poetry and I believe you will carve yourself a niche in the memory of history....Keep keeping on! 7+++!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 4:12:00 AM
Thank u Hannington
Date: 8/7/2015 12:35:00 AM
Hi Njeri, this is such a clever, well-written, enjoyable piece! Good luck in the contest, my friend! Pandita
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 4:11:00 AM
Thank u Pandita
Date: 8/6/2015 11:57:00 PM
Love the message here, Njeri. All the best in the contest.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 9/17/2015 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Kim
Date: 8/6/2015 6:18:00 PM
Hi, Njeri, I like your poem and the theme. See soup mail. ~~~Darlene
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/6/2015 7:57:00 PM
Thank u Darlene. God bless you

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