Dalila Agtani Poet Dodoitsu

Honey

HONEY  (Tails)

Honey, be merry, be free
Much December joy, enjoy.
Drop me money honey bee
Yum, yum, yum, FEED me!

Dalila Agtani 12/17/11

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 Contest Name H-E-A-D-S OR T-A-I-L-S!

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Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2011 at 12:12 AM To tell you the truth, even though it's shorter. I actually like this one better. It's just kinda cute and it's grammatical too!

Andrea Dietrich December 23, 2011 at 4:41 PM There is nothing wrong. I think she'd like it!!

Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2011 at 12:41 AM OH, so I get it about the honey bee!! Sweet this is. I hope it does well in the contest!