V. Deepa Poet Free verse

Homophonous Intervention

I was sailing with my friends to explore 
the site with my sight

I stand on the edge and see a sea

Quickly grabbed my blue whistle and blew

They all stood here beneath me to hear

Wasn't allowed to make noise aloud

Annoyed a little they stare at me as i came down the stair

I would always wish to be like bee

Someone threw the ball on me with a terrifying bawl

A new person whom I never knew

He purposely did that ..to ask me some sum

But I shared fruits instead ,we all happily ate at eight

I gave two of them to helmsman too

We were about to reach our place in an hour.

As we arrived the destination ran in gait to open the gate...!!

Sep 16, 2020

Brian's COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (10)
any form any theme poetry Contest(N/A).

Submitting to Second_chances_na_poems_of_2020_part_III_
Sponsored by Chantelle Anne cooke.

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John Watt October 7, 2020 at 10:03 PM Everything about this write felt right, lol! Love your wordplay and sense of fun, Deepa. A hearty congrats for your big win. Warm regards, my friend ~ John V. Deepa November 1, 2020 at 11:17 AM Write and right:-D your amazing dear John sir:-) Thanks a lot for always cheering me and am glad to know that you enjoyed & had fun reading this muse of mine. With warm regards~Deepa:-)

Sam Kauffman October 7, 2020 at 2:03 PM Back with congratulations for your win, Deepa! Fun! V. Deepa November 1, 2020 at 11:14 AM Thanks a bunch for your second visit and for your kind appreciation dear Sam mam:-)

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2020 at 3:35 PM Fun! V. Deepa November 1, 2020 at 11:13 AM Thankyou dear Kim mam:-)

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2020 at 9:32 AM this is "grate" fun!! heehee!! I enjoyed it. V. Deepa September 21, 2020 at 5:00 AM Grate~Lol, Thankyou dear Andrea mam..Glad you enjoyed homophones.. Enjoy your day.Much love:-)

Eve Roper September 17, 2020 at 6:33 PM like the way you set up the homophone words... Nicely done, my friend. V. Deepa September 21, 2020 at 4:56 AM Thankyou dear Eve mam.:-) Take care.Much love:-)

Sam Kauffman September 16, 2020 at 3:51 PM Love your homophones, Deepa - a wordsmith on the loose! Thanks for sharing your creativity! V. Deepa September 17, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thanks a bunch for your kind visit and warm encouraging words dear Sam mam.. Am pleased to know that you enjoyed my creativity.Take care.Much love:-)

Vijay Pandit September 16, 2020 at 2:04 PM Very clever write, Deepa. Great idea how you weaved the same sounding words with different meanings. Lovely wordplay. V. Deepa September 17, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thank you very much for the uplifting words and appreciations dear Vijay sir:-) Glad your liked my work.Have a beautiful day.:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu September 16, 2020 at 12:33 PM Hello Deepa, it is sunny here today. Also the leaves are beginning to change color. Your poem is so fun to read. i enjoyed it. Much love Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu September 17, 2020 at 3:04 PM Hello Deepa, Yes the leaves are starting to change colors. Once the leaves are on the ground we rake them up put into bags for the dump. Much Love Darlene. V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 12:42 PM Hello Darlene mam.. Glad you had fun reading my work.:-) Oh .. it's autumn over there I believe..! Here,we are having rainy season mam:-) Take care. Enjoy your day..Much love:-)