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Homey Hiatus, Hiatus Homey Noble nascent notice nature, frequents features fertile favor, charming colors cure complacent, notice nature, noble nascent. Subtle stages stylishly sort, pledged perianths pleasures purport, artless aiming accrue ages, stylishly sort subtle stages. Weeping Willows wigwag waters, often ogles overt otters, eaglet escapes easy expose, wigwag waters, Weeping Willows. Becalming boon blamed babbling brook, lingering lulls laboring look, saunters solely scenery strewn, blamed babbling brook becalming boon. *Alliteration/Rhyme Scheme The first and last line reversed per stanza 8 syllable count per line 2021 January 27 Hiatus ~~Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 2/24/2021 7:18:00 PM
Swooning under the brilliance of this write! Congrats on the first place win!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/25/2021 1:38:00 AM
I am grateful for your extended courtesies my friend, Aloha!
Date: 2/24/2021 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations William on your first place win! This "hiatus" so reflects your creativity and masterful handling of alliteration! Hope you are well. Aloha!
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Date: 2/24/2021 2:41:00 PM
My thanks, Sam, for your wonderful indulgence whilst I bide my time drifting in and out of PS within this restrictive state of ours, take care, Aloha!
Date: 2/24/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and picture. Wish I was sitting by the water under the trees. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/24/2021 1:04:00 PM
Many thanks, Paula, for your well-thought-out words and for your longing, Aloha!
Date: 2/24/2021 7:57:00 AM
William, very creative and congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
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Date: 2/24/2021 12:55:00 PM
Most appreciative, Constance, for your caring words, Aloha!
Date: 2/24/2021 6:42:00 AM
EXCELLENT I am overwhelmed. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessings
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Date: 2/24/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha, for your kindhearted considerations my friend, Aloha!

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