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Homey Hiatus, Hiatus Homey

Homey Hiatus, Hiatus Homey

Noble nascent notice nature,
frequents features fertile favor,
charming colors cure complacent,
notice nature, noble nascent.

Subtle stages stylishly sort,
pledged perianths pleasures purport,
artless aiming accrue ages,
stylishly sort subtle stages.

Weeping Willows wigwag waters,
often ogles overt otters,
eaglet escapes easy expose,
wigwag waters, Weeping Willows.

Becalming boon blamed babbling brook,
lingering lulls laboring look, 
saunters solely scenery strewn,
blamed babbling brook becalming boon.

*Alliteration/Rhyme Scheme
The first and last line reversed per stanza
8 syllable count per line

2021 January 27
Hiatus
~~Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Seeker Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:18 PM
Swooning under the brilliance of this write! Congrats on the first place win!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:38 AM
I am grateful for your extended courtesies my friend, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations William on your first place win! This "hiatus" so reflects your creativity and masterful handling of alliteration! Hope you are well. Aloha!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 2:41 PM
My thanks, Sam, for your wonderful indulgence whilst I bide my time drifting in and out of PS within this restrictive state of ours, take care, Aloha!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and picture. Wish I was sitting by the water under the trees. Have a blessed day writing away........................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:04 PM
Many thanks, Paula, for your well-thought-out words and for your longing, Aloha!
La France Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:57 AM
William, very creative and congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Most appreciative, Constance, for your caring words, Aloha!
Dutta Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:42 AM
EXCELLENT I am overwhelmed. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessings
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Anisha, for your kindhearted considerations my friend, Aloha!
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