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Home's Whispering Soul

"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering? " Quote by _Constance La France The knowledge is worth more than anything; wistful memories we called home did bring. Where our story drone echoed through the walls; this abandoned home's soul as daylight falls. Children's loud whispers ever robust songs, weaved with endless squabbles of rights and wrongs. Decay from yesteryear changing seasons; leaves fell, covered round, a mulch like reason. Green balm, soundlessness hollow, nature's home, lull emotions of hopefulness now roam. As it faints away and falls, darkness calls to the soul of the house's mournful walls. 5/30/2023 Contest: Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/7/2023 5:05:00 PM
Very lovely, Eve. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/6/2023 5:31:00 AM
- Beautifully written...the memories are still in the walls...congratulations on your win, dear Eve :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2023 8:44:00 PM
"As it faints away and falls, darkness calls to the soul of the house's mournful walls" - A touching picture. Beautifully written in couplet form. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2023 6:56:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Date: 6/3/2023 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Eve, on your top win. Once you have lived in a house, and created great memories, the house will speak to you for ever! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:15:00 AM
Lovely poetry Eve, someone’s heart and soul will remain within their abandoned home, wherever or however far they roam… Belle
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Date: 5/31/2023 2:00:00 AM
Excellent couplets, Eve.
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Date: 5/31/2023 1:38:00 AM
Oh Eve, if only we could listen back to the memories of a dwelling - the ups and downs of life happy and sad times. then again some things need to be left well and truly under locked doors. very well penned Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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