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"this poem is not about what is written, but what is not written. . . " Oh don’t fall in love with me For I’m a drifting cloud in the sky My life is unbound and enchantingly free A bird that can anywhere fly Love can’t hold me forever tight I’m a homeless butterfly The stars and moon that shine in the night Are my guiding lights in the sky A free flowing river is my life No ripple stays there for long Can a life really be without strife? There is deep pain in my song A fluttering virginal candle A dancing silent flame Emotions love can’t handle No one is there to blame 01/07/2011 By Tahera Mannan For Constance’s “ The Unwritten” contest

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Date: 7/8/2011 6:33:00 PM
I am so happy I decided to see all the winners of this contest. So far not a bad one in the bunch. I love the way you took this theme to that of unattainable love which makes it unique. congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:31:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! wonderful win with this terrific splendid write...*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:11:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Tahera. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in the contest with this beautiful piece. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "The Unwritten" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 9:09:00 PM
congratulations Tahera!!!
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:44:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:16:00 PM
always mystifying me, tahera… swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/5/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on this wonderful win with this dynamic write luv.. awesome as always from u ..enjoy sweets...
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:34:00 AM
Beautiful, Tahera. Many congrats : )
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Date: 7/5/2011 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in my contest with this splendid poem~~
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:42:00 PM
Very nice approach to the contest photo Tahera..best wishes.
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:01:00 PM
Lovely poetic expressions of isolation and disattachment, Tahera. By the way, please read my poem The Unique Convention where I invited you play Sitar. Not seen much these days. Hope everything is alright.
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