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Homeland

What’s a homeland, I don’t know
Sounds a bit too much symbolic 
I’ve got no land of my own
So it turns out hyperbolic 
This home concept is not real 
Could be my imagination 
Sort of melancholy feel
Hardly a concrete location
Not the property I own
Not a shelter from the rain
Not a place where I was born
But a picture that remains
They say home is where the heart is
And my heart is over there 
Far away, where willow trees
Softly rustle in damp air.

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Date: 4/30/2024 8:13:00 AM
Dear Gregory, you have really dug into the complex notion of homeland, questioning its symbolic significance and pondering its elusive nature. What a thought-provoking exploration of belonging and nostalgia, highlighting the intangible yet profound connection between the heart and a distant place. - Blessings, Daniel
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Gregory Colodub
Date: 5/1/2024 4:36:00 AM
Oh thank you so much for your deep and kind response, dear Daniel! Blessings, Greg
Date: 4/30/2024 2:08:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Gregory Colodub
Date: 4/30/2024 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeanette!

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