Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Verse

Homecoming

darkness 
         
         s u r r o u n d s

         mountains

         
         birds

         r e t u r n

         home


         October 30, 2020
         For "in Just A Few Words" contest
         Sponsor: Joseph May

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John Watt October 31, 2020 at 11:39 PM Mala, back to wish you warm congrats for your win with this lovely nature write ~ John John Watt November 1, 2020 at 9:08 PM As do I, Mala. It is an indescribable blessing to be among so many gifted and nurturing poetry friends. Blessings ~ John Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2020 at 5:36 AM Thank you so much, John. Appreciate your encouraging comments. Feel fortunate to be surrounded by talented poets. Best wishes, Mala

Anitha Jayasankar October 31, 2020 at 11:37 PM Great imagery Malabika... Congrats on your win... :)... Hugs.. ~ Ani Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2020 at 5:34 AM Thanks, Anita. Appreciate your inspiring comment. Love, Mala

Eve Roper October 31, 2020 at 10:45 PM Malabika, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Malabika Ray Choudhury November 1, 2020 at 5:39 AM Thank you, Eve. It's great to learn and grow in the company of talented poets. Love, Mala

Carol Mitra October 31, 2020 at 9:30 PM Nicely put...Congrats on your win Malabika. Malabika Ray Choudhury November 11, 2020 at 5:38 PM Thanks, Carol. Appreciate your kind words.

Darlene De Beaulieu October 31, 2020 at 4:17 PM Hello Mala, this is a beautiful home coming. Love Darlene enjoy your evening . Malabika Ray Choudhury November 11, 2020 at 5:39 PM Thanks, Darlene. So sweet of you! Love, Mala

Jan Allison October 31, 2020 at 3:20 PM sweet poem, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 3:23 PM Thanks, My Sweet Friend. Your comment inspires me. Love, Mala

Joseph May October 31, 2020 at 12:50 PM Very nicely done Malabika, Congrats on your win.. Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 2:17 PM Thank you, Joseph. Feel honoured!

Alexis Y. October 31, 2020 at 11:43 AM Hi Malabika, Congratulations on your winning write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 2:19 PM Thanks, Alexis. Fun to write short and sweet poems.

Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 11:40 AM Congratulations on the win Malbika! Linda Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 2:22 PM Thanks, Linda. Appreciate your encouraging words. Love, Mala

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2020 at 11:33 AM - Congratulations on your win, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 2:21 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your kind words. Love, Mala

John Watt October 30, 2020 at 6:34 PM Mala, a lovely distillation of scenes from nature. Well done, best wishes ~ John Malabika Ray Choudhury October 31, 2020 at 2:20 PM Thanks, John. Appreciate your encouraging words.

Silent One October 30, 2020 at 2:26 PM You said so much in so little words.. Malabika Ray Choudhury October 30, 2020 at 4:47 PM Thank you, Dear Poet. It’s fun to express a lot in a few words.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2020 at 1:53 PM - Lovely, Mala :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Malabika Ray Choudhury October 30, 2020 at 2:05 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Fun to write short, but sweet poems. Love, Mala