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darkness s u r r o u n d s mountains birds r e t u r n home October 30, 2020 For "in Just A Few Words" contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 11/18/2020 7:35:00 PM
Ah, Mala, your fluid pen evokes the "homecoming" in the Natural world with vivid poetic beauty. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susan
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/19/2020 6:17:00 AM
Dear Susan, so kind of you! immensely delighted that you find vivid poetic beauty in this poem. I am reading your brilliant poems many times. Love ~ Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 11:39:00 PM
Mala, back to wish you warm congrats for your win with this lovely nature write ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 11/1/2020 9:08:00 PM
As do I, Mala. It is an indescribable blessing to be among so many gifted and nurturing poetry friends. Blessings ~ John
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/1/2020 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, John. Appreciate your encouraging comments. Feel fortunate to be surrounded by talented poets. Best wishes, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 11:37:00 PM
Great imagery Malabika... Congrats on your win... :)... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 11/1/2020 5:34:00 AM
Thanks, Anita. Appreciate your inspiring comment. Love, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 10:45:00 PM
Malabika, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/1/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. It's great to learn and grow in the company of talented poets. Love, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 9:30:00 PM
Nicely put...Congrats on your win Malabika.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thanks, Carol. Appreciate your kind words.
Date: 10/31/2020 4:17:00 PM
Hello Mala, this is a beautiful home coming. Love Darlene enjoy your evening .
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/11/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. So sweet of you! Love, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 3:20:00 PM
sweet poem, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/31/2020 3:23:00 PM
Thanks, My Sweet Friend. Your comment inspires me. Love, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 12:50:00 PM
Very nicely done Malabika, Congrats on your win..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/31/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Feel honoured!
Date: 10/31/2020 11:43:00 AM
Hi Malabika, Congratulations on your winning write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/31/2020 2:19:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis. Fun to write short and sweet poems.
Date: 10/31/2020 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Malbika! Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thanks, Linda. Appreciate your encouraging words. Love, Mala
Date: 10/31/2020 11:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/31/2020 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Appreciate your kind words. Love, Mala
Date: 10/30/2020 6:34:00 PM
Mala, a lovely distillation of scenes from nature. Well done, best wishes ~ John
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/31/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, John. Appreciate your encouraging words.
Date: 10/30/2020 2:26:00 PM
You said so much in so little words..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/30/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet. It’s fun to express a lot in a few words.
Date: 10/30/2020 1:53:00 PM
- Lovely, Mala :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/30/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Fun to write short, but sweet poems. Love, Mala

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