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Home Sweet Home H appiness is found when the heart is O pen to kindness and love, giving even M ore than one receives from others E ven giving when it's not expected S pecial moments shared as a family W hile enjoying a meal or recreation E ntertaining and being entertained E njoying each others company using the T ime shared, bonding and uniting in love H ere is where happiness and love O riginate, and is taught to be expressed M easuring affection by the time and attention E veryone gives and receives from each other. John Derek Hamilton January 27,2016

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Date: 2/2/2016 5:37:00 AM
Amazing poem! Remarkable acrostic. A 7.
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John Hamilton
Date: 2/2/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thanks J.W appreciate the comment very much!
Date: 1/28/2016 11:59:00 PM
Bit samey, samey, I don't think you need to emphasise the Acrostic using capitals, it stops the flow, ...more a homely monologue, but ok...Mark
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/29/2016 8:44:00 AM
Thanks for the critique...it's for a contest just a sample, hope you will give it a try then I can return the favour.
Date: 1/28/2016 5:46:00 PM
Well now that you've used all the good ideas, John, that leaves the rest of us little to say..haha. I'll work on it.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/29/2016 8:43:00 AM
I'm sure you will do even better!
Date: 1/27/2016 7:04:00 PM
Beautifully done and well said A7
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/28/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thanks Daniel for your visit and comment and rating, I am thankful.

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