Home Sweet Home

Easy are the paths to follow
when I'm young and fancy free,
home is comfort, joy, a blessing,
caring folks and constancy.
My borders are the playroom, garden,
narrow spaces, fledgling child,
questions answered with a bear hug,
nothing crazy, nothing wild.

Later, as my frontiers widen,
gone the band aid to placate,
in the cauldron of confusion,
far beyond the garden gate.
Childhood greeting, pale and fleeting,
life no longer black and white,
paths collide and intermingle,
as I ponder dark and light.

Walking through the forest blindly, 
Hansel with no Gretel near,
breadcrumbs are a cruel delusion,
still my courage, stoke my fear.
Faith and pride and resolution
drive my journey on, because,
though I've traveled many pathways,
home is where it always was.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Shahein Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:43 PM
This is a magnificent poem my dear , a spectacular piece of work , very touchy and great it's just simply beautiful...Merry Christmas and happy new year...hugs / / :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:47 PM
You are most kind my dear! Your delightful remarks are much appreciated... Best wishes, Keith
A   Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Nice verse Keith, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 9:27 PM
Thanks Linda! Best wishes, Keith
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Great write and very fitting for Christmas I might add!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Thanks Arthur! Your kind remarks are greatly appreciated! Keith
George   Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:42 AM
As always, you touched my very soul with your magnificent writing. Thank you! Elaine
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 10:52 AM
God bless you my dear! and thank you for such a heartwarming review. Keith
Lane Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:43 AM
When I first saw your title, my mind raced with thought of Hansel and Gretel...you wove them in just right, Keith.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Thanks so much for your delightful review! I am most grateful, Best wishes, Keith
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