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Home Of The Tortoise (Haiku)

The load is heavy, for one who carries his home on his back, always

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 9/2/2008 5:47:00 PM
What an interesting thought! This is such a creative poem. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 8/30/2008 4:10:00 PM
Oh my, so very true. Never thought about it that way. Very clever. Love Heidie
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Date: 8/29/2008 7:11:00 AM
Adell, this is an awesome haiku! One of my favorites. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/29/2008 2:07:00 AM
These words are worth more than gold. I like the philosophy in this haiku. Great job! ~ Joseph
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