Home is Home

The first thing she saw when she opened her eyes
is his beautiful smile , as she sits up and tries
but the doctor says ' no, you cant get up yet'
it was a long operation, and the healing to let

the surgery not good, but had to be done
and wont know for weeks if she's finally won
but they'll face it together, what ever may come
whatever will be, she can still feel the sun

she cant hear a bird song or rustle of leaves
and she cant him say' l love you' if covered in sleeve
but things are so better, if fighting together
and if he's beside her, all problems they'll weather

the surgery not good, and they told her in time
she wont hear a thing, but things will be fine
and the music she loves, no more shall she hear
and they always say better, if fighting together

so life is funny, as she cant hear him much
as she lip reads his lips, and his face she does touch
he jokes he can say , what ever he likes
and she jokes she will buy him , a loud speaker mike

but she misses the music,  of natures out doors
and the sound of the rain , on windows and doors
but she thanks her God daily , for not being alone
and fighting things together , for home ................ is home

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Date: 7/27/2025 10:10:00 AM
Ah, you won my heart over dear Jacqueline, not better place than home, either in a house or in some ones heart, thankyou for sharing this wonderful poem today, :)
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/27/2025 12:41:00 PM
many thanks for kind reply. l must catch up reading your poetry soon as l keep missing your posts. take care. Jackie.
Date: 7/27/2025 6:01:00 AM
My wife's hip replacement surgery is a slow heal too. Alot of pain but she's not confined in any way thank goodness. I think I remember you saying once you're in bed a good bit? Hope you're up and at 'em soon
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/27/2025 12:38:00 PM
Many thanks Tom. and l really hope your wife has recovery soon from the painful surgery she had . Jackie
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