Home Invasion

scraping of the soil
invasion of millipedes
unearthed by rakers ~
those roly poly critters
in every nook and cranny

9/6/2021
A Buggy Tanka
M.L. Kiser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 3:32 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:35 AM
God bless you, Beata! Thank you!
Roper Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Good one, Kim, congratulations on your win. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 3:58 AM
Sorry to hear this. That would not be a pleasant invasion nor is the invasion of other pests. Thanks for your visit to my page with congrats. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Your welcome, sweet poet! This was several years ago. Was not fun!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 3:50 AM
This is a terrific "buggy tanka" Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 1:16 AM
They make your skin crawl yuck. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:24 AM
They were all over the garage and infringes themselves in lower levels of the house. Yuck indeed!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:30 PM
I think they keep the soil loose and health. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Good when they’re OUTside lol
Bangalee Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:09 PM
Awe-some that is
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Thanks, Mahtab!
Ball Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:03 PM
Oohoohoohoo! Bugs! Hate Bugs! Gross little creepy crawlies that get into everything. I Don't Like Bugs! Except for butterflies, dragonflies, Bees, lady bugs. Nicely done. You gave me the creeps. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:26 AM
My job is done…LOL…love your exclamations! Hugs, Judy!
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