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Home Invasion

scraping of the soil invasion of millipedes unearthed by rakers ~ those roly poly critters in every nook and cranny 9/6/2021 A Buggy Tanka M.L. Kiser

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/12/2021 3:32:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2021 4:35:00 AM

God bless you, Beata! Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2021 9:12:00 PM

Good one, Kim, congratulations on your win. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2021 3:58:00 AM

Sorry to hear this. That would not be a pleasant invasion nor is the invasion of other pests. Thanks for your visit to my page with congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2021 7:40:00 AM

Your welcome, sweet poet! This was several years ago. Was not fun!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/7/2021 3:50:00 AM

This is a terrific "buggy tanka" Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:23:00 AM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/7/2021 1:16:00 AM

They make your skin crawl yuck. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:24:00 AM

They were all over the garage and infringes themselves in lower levels of the house. Yuck indeed!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/6/2021 10:30:00 PM

I think they keep the soil loose and health. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:25:00 AM

Good when they’re OUTside lol

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/6/2021 10:09:00 PM

Awe-some that is

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thanks, Mahtab!

Judy Ball

Date: 9/6/2021 10:03:00 PM

Oohoohoohoo! Bugs! Hate Bugs! Gross little creepy crawlies that get into everything. I Don't Like Bugs! Except for butterflies, dragonflies, Bees, lady bugs. Nicely done. You gave me the creeps. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2021 4:26:00 AM

My job is done…LOL…love your exclamations! Hugs, Judy!