Home Again

From the top of a hill
 he felt the thrill
 of finally seeing his valley once more,
 with vermilion tile roofs dotted below,
 where luscious fruit trees grow.
As the seductive sweet scent of Frangipani infused the air, 
 his heart beat a little faster there.
Finally he was back to his ancestral home,  
 never more to roam.
Home, near a pellucid stream,
 of sparkling ripples
 remembered in a twilight dream.
He saw his menagerie of pets in his reverie: a monkey, 
 a parrot, a dog, a cat, a bright yellow canary.
Soon his Mama would open her arms 
 as the mockingbird in the tree by the door   
 would announce his arrival once more.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Jan. 10, 2018
"All Rights Reserved"
   3rd place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 6:31 PM
Back to congratulate you Carole. Hugs Rick. I enjoyed rereading this one.
Duet Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Rick. I really appreciate that. :) Carole Duet
Roper Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Great job arrange the 10 words, congratulations on your win, Carole. Hugs Eve ~`*
Duet Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Eve. :) Carole Duet
Inman Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:30 AM
What a lovely snippet of what could be a wonderful story Carole.
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Hi, James. I agree. Although I admit I never thought of this as the beginning of a "story" I think it could make a nice one. Thanks so much. Carole Duet
Ashley Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:22 PM
A beautiful welcome home.. Congratulations Carole on your lovely win with your amazing write. Lovely music and voices to accompany your poem as well.. ~Susan
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:16 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. I'm so glad you liked the music too. Carole Duet :)
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Returning with congrats on your well deserved win, Carole.
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:14 AM
Thank you so much for coming back to congratulate me, Vijay. I really appreciate that. Carole :)
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January 11, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Lovely poem Carole! Congratulations!! (great music to go along with it as well:) ~Judy
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Thank you, Judith. So glad you liked it and the music too. :D Carole
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Carole.
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Thank you, Line. I appreciate that. Carole Duet :)
Y. Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Hi Carole, I found this write to be not only beautiful but breathtaking as well. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:08 AM
Wow! Thank you, Alexis. What a nice comment! Carole Duet :D
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Lovely poem Carole and you used the ten words very well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 5:04 AM
P.S. Notice by-the-way, ZZ, that I have revised the poem a bit since I entered the contest. Carole
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 1:59 AM
Thank you, ZZ. I appreciate it. Carole
Williams Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Wow Carole I would be so happy to go home with a menagerie of pets to welcome me home like that. Amazing write my friend, 10 words and 10 lines make up some impressive imagery. And excellent choice of music. Good luck in the contest....Maria xxx
Duet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 2:05 AM
Thank you so much, Maria. :D xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Great story telling. Good luck in the contest Carol.
Duet Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Richard. Carole :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 7:58 AM
Wondrous imagery that seduce the senses dearest , Carole! Inspiring music. Excellently done! Good luck in the contest!
Duet Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios. :) Carole
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Feels like a warm welcome home--well written, Carole, best for a win.
Duet Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Thanks a lot, Vijay. Carole :)
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