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lingering softly
in the angelic silence
of a magical new night...

i remember whispered words
the softness of your breath
tingling the nape of my neck...

your eyes deep pools
touch light as a feather
my head on your chest...

the sea scented air
delicately cocooned us
our lips barely touched...

waves lulled our own melody
of sweet sacred tunes
as hearts became one...

i remember the moment
that time stood still...

how do i describe
something bigger than words...

for in the air
that i breathe

it is you
who has blessed me...

heaven sent you
from the stars above...

the sound of your heartbeat
was when i knew...

i

was

home.







reworked 08-10-2016

blessingdevotionemotionsfeelingsheartfree verse

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James Inman

October 11, 2024 at 12:37 AM

Hi Lynn, it's me again. Always loved this poem. Milton made me think about you, not that I need a reason. I have reread many of your poems tonight. They are so emotional. Have you looked at your live laugh love email lately?

James Inman

August 21, 2019 at 8:21 AM

I love the way you did this one. I felt the quickening of your heart beat and increase of intensity as the stanzas shortened leading to the defining moment of the last three words.

Paul Callus

February 26, 2017 at 10:22 AM

Hi Lynn....though there is no comment here, I am sure that I read this poem before. You have a way with words....poetically beautiful and romantic. #7 Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

August 24, 2016 at 12:13 AM

this is so fantastic, Lynn. one of the most romantic ones I have seen all week. a FAVE

Lynn Marie

August 26, 2016 at 2:47 AM

..you are too kind...i am touched you enjoyed it.. and as a fave too.. I appreciate you and your amazing poetry...thank you so very much :-) bundles of blessings and hugs to you..and a few 'virtual cheezies' too..lol lynn

John Hamilton

August 22, 2016 at 10:22 AM

Loved it Lynn Marie, what a palette of words you have, and your brush strokes amazing! Loved the way you reduce your stanzas from 3 lines to 2 very effective for the reader to savor the flavor of your words!

Lynn Marie

August 26, 2016 at 2:51 AM

thank you very much john for your thoughtful words, kindness and friendly visits :-) you are very talented and I appreciate your encouragement :-) lynn

Bl Devnath

August 17, 2016 at 1:22 PM

It's an exceptional poem of romantic feeling. Beautiful pen used to express the golden moment with loved one. My favorite too. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

August 20, 2016 at 2:07 AM

..your comment is pure poetry..thank you for the "sunshine" and lovely visits..have a wonderful weekend :-)

Vladislav Raven

August 13, 2016 at 11:25 AM

Hi Lynn, a most beautiful poetic write with such loving emotions dosplayed. Romance does sing from your pen in this write, a gentle elegance. One can lose oneself within the feelings. A definite seven Lynn. Hugs....Mike. Lynn.

Lynn Marie

August 20, 2016 at 2:16 AM

...you are the master of romance mike...i appreciate your poetry, kind words and happy visits..thank you so much :-)