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lingering softly
in the angelic silence
of a magical new night...

i remember whispered words
the softness of your breath
tingling the nape of my neck...

your eyes deep pools
touch light as a feather
my head on your chest...

the sea scented air
delicately cocooned us
our lips barely touched...

waves lulled our own melody
of sweet sacred tunes
as hearts became one...

i remember the moment
that time stood still...

how do i describe
something bigger than words...

for in the air
that i breathe

it is you
who has blessed me...

heaven sent you
from the stars above...

the sound of your heartbeat
was when i knew...

i

was

home.







reworked 08-10-2016

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Date: 2/26/2017 10:22:00 AM
Hi Lynn....though there is no comment here, I am sure that I read this poem before. You have a way with words....poetically beautiful and romantic. #7 Best regards // paul
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Date: 8/24/2016 12:13:00 AM
this is so fantastic, Lynn. one of the most romantic ones I have seen all week. a FAVE
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:47:00 AM
..you are too kind...i am touched you enjoyed it.. and as a fave too.. I appreciate you and your amazing poetry...thank you so very much :-) bundles of blessings and hugs to you..and a few 'virtual cheezies' too..lol lynn
Date: 8/22/2016 10:22:00 AM
Loved it Lynn Marie, what a palette of words you have, and your brush strokes amazing! Loved the way you reduce your stanzas from 3 lines to 2 very effective for the reader to savor the flavor of your words!
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:51:00 AM
thank you very much john for your thoughtful words, kindness and friendly visits :-) you are very talented and I appreciate your encouragement :-) lynn
Date: 8/17/2016 1:22:00 PM
It's an exceptional poem of romantic feeling. Beautiful pen used to express the golden moment with loved one. My favorite too. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:07:00 AM
..your comment is pure poetry..thank you for the "sunshine" and lovely visits..have a wonderful weekend :-)
Date: 8/13/2016 11:25:00 AM
Hi Lynn, a most beautiful poetic write with such loving emotions dosplayed. Romance does sing from your pen in this write, a gentle elegance. One can lose oneself within the feelings. A definite seven Lynn. Hugs....Mike. Lynn.
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:16:00 AM
...you are the master of romance mike...i appreciate your poetry, kind words and happy visits..thank you so much :-)
Date: 8/10/2016 12:46:00 PM
Tender and romantic words Lynn. Lovely! ; )
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Date: 8/20/2016 2:10:00 AM
thank you so much connie ...enjoy a lovely weekend :-)
Date: 8/10/2016 12:27:00 AM
such breathtaking romantic imagery Lynn you have such a beautiful flow to your lines. You have a wonderful way with words Lynn:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2016 1:05:00 AM
i appreciate your encouragement..thank you :-) lynn
Date: 8/9/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thats beautiful, and really touching, great job.
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Date: 8/10/2016 1:01:00 AM
thank you so much for your kind comments..:-) lynn
Date: 8/8/2016 7:46:00 PM
very sweet and romantic...I like cocooned
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:10:00 PM
lol...ditto "cocooned"! thank you very much for reading. lynn