Homage To Vienna

This is one of a few sonnets Mystic and I collaborated on
she has left PS and in her honor, I'm posting it

To you Vienna, my writing buddy

                                         To Be in Love
                            To be in love along the rushing shore
                            And hear sounds from your heartbeats that enslave
                            To kiss your hungry lips, then wanting more
                            Obtaining love's desire, its constant crave
                            Besot, beneath this dazzled sky, I find
                            Love's lightning splays a light that clears my view
                            Such echoed worlds, soft as waves inclined
                            Submerge through quiet eyes a love so true
                            My hand entwined in yours, we bond as one
                            While watching footprints fade in pebbled sand
                            To spy a reddening sky and setting sun
                            While falling into night, at stars command

                                   We'll feel the waves upon our warmest skin
                                   And touch the stars, as dawn arouses in

                                 written by Mystic Rose and me
                                                  3/3/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 5:22 PM
So nice to see it was your first collaboration, Frederic.
Sheehan Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 11:53 AM
Excellent collaboration and Sonnet. It is very romantic and compelling. It has great rhythm and flow.
Sands Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Hi Frederic. This is beautiful! I did not realize she left and I am saddened to hear about that.
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 5:06 PM
as we all are,
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 3:28 PM
Very romantic and lovely, Frederic.Soup mail
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 4:59 PM
thank you Andrea, this was our first collaboration, thus...meant more to me
Smith Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 3:26 PM
So very sorry to hear Vienna is leaving, I will miss her so, This was lovely...
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 4:54 PM
yes Charlie, she will be missed
Manassian Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Lovely write, Frederic. Such a beautiful collaboration. Mystic was always kind to me. She will be missed. I guess I can still keep in touch via Facebook. Blessings.
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 4:54 PM
yes she said facebook, a platform I do not use much
One Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Was so sad to see her leave, but I understand her reasons... A great sonnet.. A great tribute, she will be missed by all...
Parker Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 2:42 PM
yes, she will Silent One
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