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Homage To Vienna

This is one of a few sonnets Mystic and I collaborated on
she has left PS and in her honor, I'm posting it

To you Vienna, my writing buddy

                                         To Be in Love
                            To be in love along the rushing shore
                            And hear sounds from your heartbeats that enslave
                            To kiss your hungry lips, then wanting more
                            Obtaining love's desire, its constant crave
                            Besot, beneath this dazzled sky, I find
                            Love's lightning splays a light that clears my view
                            Such echoed worlds, soft as waves inclined
                            Submerge through quiet eyes a love so true
                            My hand entwined in yours, we bond as one
                            While watching footprints fade in pebbled sand
                            To spy a reddening sky and setting sun
                            While falling into night, at stars command

                                   We'll feel the waves upon our warmest skin
                                   And touch the stars, as dawn arouses in

                                 written by Mystic Rose and me
                                                  3/3/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/8/2017 5:22:00 PM
So nice to see it was your first collaboration, Frederic.
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Date: 11/8/2017 11:53:00 AM
Excellent collaboration and Sonnet. It is very romantic and compelling. It has great rhythm and flow.
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:03:00 PM
Hi Frederic. This is beautiful! I did not realize she left and I am saddened to hear about that.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2017 5:06:00 PM
as we all are,
Date: 11/7/2017 3:28:00 PM
Very romantic and lovely, Frederic.Soup mail
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2017 4:59:00 PM
thank you Andrea, this was our first collaboration, thus...meant more to me
Date: 11/7/2017 3:26:00 PM
So very sorry to hear Vienna is leaving, I will miss her so, This was lovely...
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2017 4:54:00 PM
yes Charlie, she will be missed
Date: 11/7/2017 2:51:00 PM
Lovely write, Frederic. Such a beautiful collaboration. Mystic was always kind to me. She will be missed. I guess I can still keep in touch via Facebook. Blessings.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2017 4:54:00 PM
yes she said facebook, a platform I do not use much
Date: 11/7/2017 2:13:00 PM
Was so sad to see her leave, but I understand her reasons... A great sonnet.. A great tribute, she will be missed by all...
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/7/2017 2:42:00 PM
yes, she will Silent One

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