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If you can dream- and not make dreams your master
If you can think-and not make thoughts your aim
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two imposters just the same
If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken,
And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools:

Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
And - which is more - you'll be a Man, my son!

Do you ever ponder on the purpose of life? wonder why things turn out the way they do? ever look back and think I did that wrongly? then go and make exactly the same mistake? ("If you can dream- and not make dreams your master If you can think-and not make thoughts your aim If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster And treat those two imposters just the same If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools, Or watch the things you gave your life to, broken, And stoop and build 'em up with worn-out tools:") What is the purpose of us even being on this planet? Will our actions live on once we are gone from here? Or like a breeze floating past will we just vanish? Like the early dawn mists burnt off by the sun? What will you teach your children about this coil? Will you guide them well? make them fine citizens? Leaving them to be your legacy of a life well spent? They say a butterfly's wings beating changes the weather All I know is strive to do right and be kind to all To put others first before I choose a path in life ("Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it, And - which is more - you'll be a Man, my son!") 07/25/2013 written for Homage contest passages taken from If by Kipling

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Date: 8/17/2013 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations Shadow, , a wonderful Homage to this poet... SKAT
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Date: 8/17/2013 11:18:00 AM
Congrats to you. You chose a wonderful poet to emulate. I love his works.
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:40:00 PM
"If" has always been my favourite poem. Ty Andrea Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/17/2013 11:07:00 AM
Congrad's on your win! Ahh Kipling! Light & Love
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:41:00 PM
yes Debbie he is awesome. Ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/17/2013 7:29:00 AM
Well deserved win. This is a thinking poem, very well expressed
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:42:00 PM
hi Monterey so nice to see you Ty appreciated Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/17/2013 7:16:00 AM
This was an excellent choice and so well expressed Shadow.
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Date: 8/17/2013 5:43:00 PM
so kind of you Richard ty Shadow xox smiles
Date: 7/28/2013 9:32:00 AM
Shadow, My friend, I am impressed with your choice of poets to honor. Your entry speaks well of the inspiration his work brings to your pen.... Well done, and good luck in the contest... Love ya..... Jake
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:31:00 PM
ty Jake I did consider Wordsworth as I was in Grasmere in april but If has always been my favorite poem ty for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/28/2013 5:14:00 AM
Highly Kiplingesque, I should say. Thank you.
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Date: 7/28/2013 5:26:00 AM
Ty Gerald very kind of you to take time to read Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/27/2013 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem! I often find myself wondering. :D Loved it -Heather
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:39:00 PM
Ty Heather though my words will never be as good as his Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 5:22:00 PM
Inspirational. This is really good. Thanks for sharing your wisdom and wrapping it up so nicely for the reader. Very cool. Always, Laura
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:42:00 PM
hi Laura so happy you got inspiration from it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 3:51:00 PM
Perfectly said Shadow and grand message...
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:43:00 PM
Ty Donna very pleased you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 2:42:00 PM
very existentialist in expression and crearively inquisitive.. so well done, shadow.. thanks for appreciating my poem in your contest; much honored!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:45:00 PM
hi Nette yours was a lovely poem Ty for liking this Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 8:03:00 AM
This was wonderfully layered out. You colored a beautiful & necessary message here.
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:38:00 AM
hi Drake ty dear sorted out problem with browser all working ok. Ty I was a little unsure if I had got it right Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 5:47:00 AM
hi my dearest friend nice to see you so glad you like it love Shadow smiles xox
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:15:00 AM
This is a strong write my friend.I love this one,here we see love coming to the fore.Thanks very much for this.
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:38:00 AM
Hmmm...well I guess there are many people who are still contemplating on the purpose of live ...The answer is quite simple. Thank you for reminding us.
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Date: 7/26/2013 4:59:00 AM
Hi Christine Ty for reading Shadow x smiles

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