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holy war

A holy war blessed and authorised by the clergies, condemned and opposed by God. day and night cities shed blood, enraged crusaders fight, for a course wedded to indoctrination. "give your life or die" they chant, having more passion for evil, in the name of the Lord, they destroy, justifying black for white, sanity for insanity. killing creatures in mortal frame, littering peaceful deserts with corpse. mad crusaders, use your sense!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/9/2016 8:07:00 AM
Maybe the Hippies of the 60s were not far from the target, LL ... Make love not war! God can never agree with war, especially in His name; His teaching is based on reciprocal love. // paul
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Date: 1/10/2016 9:28:00 AM
yes dear.....God is against war and form of disunity.
Date: 1/8/2016 3:24:00 AM
The majority of thinking people hate the constant slaughter....insanity prevails with wind in its sails. like a wall of bricks with no mortar?
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Date: 1/8/2016 12:11:00 PM
yes....surely..people do insane things with no remose cos they believe t s right.
Date: 1/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
War is the most stupid thing ever , it's very awful and it makes me feel sad , great and wise write my friend , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:44:00 PM
yea....very stupid ..tanks dalia
Date: 1/7/2016 4:05:00 PM
nothing holy about war as it breeds hate excellent pen dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:22:00 PM
exactly bro... tanks...have a lovely weekend too
Date: 1/7/2016 3:53:00 PM
excellent write, I can see the words are steaming on you....
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:22:00 PM
lol tanks bro