Holy Is the Lamb

Its the form of Anaphora wrote by me!!



Whilst I love You,I can't marry You,
Whilst I hate You,I can't forget You,
Whilst I owe You,I can't wrap You in my arms,
Mine Angel wherever You are, I'll be watching You!

Whilst You are my beautiful piece,I can't stitch You in my soul.
Whilst You are my breath,You can't fill me with oxygen,
Whilst I adore You,I can't place You in my heart
Mine Angel wherever You are, I'll be watching You!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 28, 2014 at 9:25 AM
nicely done.. Linda
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March 5, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Thanks PD. ##mads
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October 6, 2014 at 11:49 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS !!! - A great 5th place in the contest, Madhavi ! - Enjoy reading it! - // Anne-Lise :)
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March 5, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Thanks Anne. ##mads
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October 6, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you, Madhavi
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March 5, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram. ##mads
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October 5, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Congratulations Madhavi on your awesome write that has claim a 5th placement in my contest! Verlena
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March 5, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Thanks Verlena for appreciating my work. ##mads
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September 30, 2014 at 5:50 AM
nicely done with the anaphora.... Enjoyed the write and the expressions// Malik
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March 5, 2015 at 1:22 AM
Thanks Malik. ##mads
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September 30, 2014 at 4:10 AM
deep very beautiful adoring piece bless you
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September 30, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Thanks Liam for you kind appreciation. :) &&mads..
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September 24, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Nice anaphoral expressions, MaDhavi
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September 25, 2014 at 12:42 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram for appreciating my write.. @@mads
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