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Holy Friday
Long, long ago afar away Jesus died on Holy Friday The close of earthly life for Him To pardon us from human sin. Greatest gift of the crucifix Is key to heaven in the mist. Sent from God, thy will to be done His most precious and only Son To reconcile earth's brokenness Peace to all was our dear Lord's quest. Greatest gift of the crucifix Is key to heaven in the mist. Though God's words were spread with honour They still crucified our brother Placed in a tomb for Christ to lay But He rose again on third day. Greatest gift of the crucifix Is key to heaven in the mist. Jesus, joy to the hearts of us We follow in the paths you took To do as you would wish us do Where you would tread, we will tread too. Greatest gift of the crucifix Is key to heaven in the mist. A crown of thorns placed on your head Thou King Jesus of Nazareth. We honour you Lord come what may Celebrating Holy Friday. Greatest gift of the crucifix Is key to heaven in the mist. 16th February 2021 EASTER english AND ARABIC !!! Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier * * Arabic jumeat muqadasa mundh zaman baeid beydana mat yaswae yawm aljumeat almuqadasa nihayat alhayat al'ardiat lah 'an yuefiana min khatiyat al'iinsan. 'aezam hadiat min alsalib hu miftah aljanat fi aldabab. mursilat min allah ltknu mushyiatak aibnih al'aghlaa walwahid liltawfiq bayn anksar al'ard alsalam liljamie kan museaa alrabi aleaziz. 'aezam hadiat min alsalib hu miftah aljanat fi aldabab. ela alrghm min aintishar kalam allah bisharaf ma zaluu yaslabun 'akhinana yudae fi qabr lilmasih 'an yarqud lukunah qam fi alyawm althaalith. 'aezam hadiat min alsalib hu miftah aljanat fi aldabab. ya yusue farih qulubuna nahn natabie alturuq alty salakatha linafeal ma tatamanaah hayth satakhatuw , sawf nusayir aydana. 'aezam hadiat min alsalib hu miftah aljanat fi aldabab. taj min al'ashwak yudae ealaa rask 'ant malak alnaasirat yusue. nukarimuk ya rabu ma easaa allah alaihtifal biawm aljumeat almuqdasati. 'aezam hadiat min alsalib hu miftah aljanat fi aldabab.

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Date: 3/8/2021 8:06:00 AM
Back to say congratulations Belle! :) Linda
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Date: 3/7/2021 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed day and Easter...................
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Date: 3/6/2021 10:03:00 AM
Sorrow and death, turned upside down into Resurrection - the Key. What a beautiful thought and summation of your song of faith, Belle. Love your repetition at the end of each stanza as a verse. Sending you congratulations and blessings!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/6/2021 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Sam, I wasn’t aware the contest had been judged, congratulations to you too. I’ve just looked in and have seen you got top spot, well done. Belle
Date: 2/22/2021 12:21:00 PM
Breathless beauty. So well done. <3
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/23/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thank you BJ... Bless you, Belle
Date: 2/20/2021 6:36:00 PM
Very well expressed Belle. Thank you
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Mystic... Belle
Date: 2/17/2021 10:36:00 PM
Spellbound I read, beautiful and uplifting. Looks like a top win to me. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/17/2021 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Rama, truly grateful for those words. You have a lovely day and take care too. Belle
Date: 2/17/2021 6:19:00 AM
Totally awesome Belle. A truly beautiful and uplifting write. :) Linda
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/17/2021 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Linda very much indeed ~ Belle :-)
Date: 2/16/2021 5:12:00 PM
- The first was beautiful ... the second is difficult ... a language I do not understand ... excellent done, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/16/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Ann-Lise, I don’t understand the Arabic language either, got it translated on an app... Hugs, Belle
Date: 2/16/2021 2:08:00 AM
Beautiful lyric Belle you've certainly put a lot of work into this and it's paid off. Good luck in the contest, hope you are well. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/16/2021 2:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Tom, let’s hope it pays off, fingers crossed. All’s well, hope it’s the same for you... Belle
Date: 2/15/2021 10:55:00 PM
The death of Christ was a triumph of God over Satan. A wonderful lyric. I of course could not read the Arabic version and wonder how much they appreciated it seeing they don't believe Jesus was God. But the English version was excellent. ~~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/16/2021 2:13:00 AM
Oh, I wasn’t aware of that fact, perhaps that puts me out of the running, have to wait and see. Thank you Victor ~~ Belle
Date: 2/15/2021 4:24:00 PM
WoW! Belle, What an excellent entry for the contest. It reads like something that was well thought out and not rushed. Good lyrics about what Jesus did, he gave his life so mankind can live. And you did it in Arabic too! This is a top contender. You just penned your way to victory( In my opinion)! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/15/2021 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, I did spend quite some time on this and wondered should I post it, I’m glad I did as an Easter poem to keep. You have a lovely day too ~ Belle :-)
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