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Holy Candle Blues

“holy candle blues” in the rust red sunset - angel brother bends his blown glass ear over the wall of eternity listening in on my sweet restless rathouse jam she entered peeling story-caked walls riding a lightning broom swept me out to half dippermoon bridge we swung downtown where waltzing heirs warmed six-figure derrieres above smorgasbord fires I faked all the right questions into hell’s Paradise panting at the emerald city ****** waiting beneath her olive skin gypsy thin cocktail feast ignoring the runaway beast and someone beamed—they make a great couple as we sweat to god’s blistering last-chance desperate romance bugle call my ragged sailor heart pirouetting out the hornpipe door over muddy cliffs on the way down a devil in white linen gown serving dark red obsession wine flaming flambé soft brown coconut limbs the fly doing backflips in a honey pot over the lava baked sea a million miles away the moaning rusted ship creaked like a red infection begging to be freed from the last ripples in a skin game port You knew all along prophet of the beautiful tracks That my ramble played in a forest of doom I surrender dear monk in the sad samba night that wind pushed me mountains away flushed me out of hiding in the prehistoric pubescent road-burnt grotto at the piano bar you played me like a thundering chord…till a midnight candle grabbed the shades and a fire came roaring down in flames we crawled like god’s sweet snails to the clear-as-a bell day glaring up to the dark blue smoke where a cherry red sunset angel rained wild woolen ashes down on love’s last twitch…applauding the singed curtain call live! live! ... he cried from his bongo perch on heaven street hot orange coals fading in the chilled breeze words we’ll never speak again you and I Unless fate has too much time to deal strange train cards this harp strung midnight reverie sad violins hijack innocent dreams and twist the arm of violet coated wishes In my hidden dark room holy candle blues… whispers of sea wind blowing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2014 11:04:00 PM
So deep I got hypnotized! very enticing! thanks for the visit :) -Maxine
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:47:00 AM
Michael, scratch my comment about line breaks - they are perfect ..this is perfect - do u have an email address. I would like to share some info wih you - if okay with you.thx. Reg
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Date: 5/29/2014 11:39:00 AM
Hi, Michael.. I don't comment on many writers work unless I find it burns a fire within that illicit color and spontaneous flames upon my tongue when read. Your word choice is over the edge and pushes me onward as a reader, slows me where I require restraint- that I love- what is now an incredible poem would be even more incredible I believe if you placed your line breaks to make it easier for the reader to shift thoughts with you - I'm reading again- then I'll return. Loved it.
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Michael Amitin
Date: 5/29/2014 11:52:00 AM
illicit color and spontaneous flames upon your tongue? wow... what a perceptive, sensual, poetic response. Many thanks Regina I'm happy to share my email address... you can have my instruments, the cat and the everything i've ever owned. aspace11@hotmail.com
Date: 5/28/2014 5:35:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Michael Amitin
Date: 5/28/2014 5:43:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta- thanks a lot for reading the poem, glad you found it interesting. Best wishes, Michael
Date: 5/5/2014 1:38:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Michael :) - I choose your first well written poem - Like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Michael Amitin
Date: 5/5/2014 1:49:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise.. Thank you for putting out such a warm welcome mat to the kitchen where poetry soup simmers. It's nice to meet you as well and I look forward to reading your poems. bisous, michael
Date: 4/29/2014 4:27:00 PM
Michael, , your first poem was enjoyable. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Michael Amitin
Date: 4/29/2014 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Linda.... that's very generous and nice of you to reach out and extend a welcome.. I don't know many poets and sort of feel like I like in a poetry vacuum- so this is great.. I as well look forward to reading more of your work and checking out the contest... take care bon journeee... michael
Date: 4/29/2014 2:50:00 PM
Michael,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Michael Amitin
Date: 4/29/2014 2:56:00 PM
That's really sweet.. thanks for the generous welcome Skat. Nice to have a poet friend.. and a place to feel like we're not poking around in an endless dark forest with a battery gone dead flashlight. I am a musician and poet and short story writer... living in Paris France... i am heavily influenced by the beats.. ginsberg, corso et al.... et toi..?
Date: 4/29/2014 6:07:00 AM
Gud
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Michael Amitin
Date: 4/29/2014 2:42:00 PM
thanks!

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