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Holy Cadoodle

Had a wild dream just the other night Was a ruler of a distant planet With forty-two slave girls to do my bidding All gorgeous with naughty habits Customs were quite a bit different to ours But one thing remained the same They liked to snuggle and do naughty things To say no, would have been insane So I suffered through this difficult ordeal And satisfied as many as I could I was plain tuckered out after twenty-eight Apologized then collapsed where I stood Woo Hooo! What an amazing reverie I'll try to dream it again tonight Some of those girls had real strange customs Holy cadoodle, talk about excite! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Donna Jones

Date: 12/20/2013 11:34:00 AM

Well...maybe the rest got their turn the next go round..you're a hoot! :-) :-) :-) :-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/20/2013 12:17:00 PM

Yes... I promised them! They're getting edgy, they can;t wait! LOL Love from hooty Jack xoxoxox

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/15/2013 5:44:00 PM

Yup yup one can dream!! Happy Holidays Light & Love

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2013 5:51:00 PM

WHATTA DREAM! LOL Best wishes for the holiday season, Miss Debbie! LOve and hugs XOXOXOX

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/15/2013 8:37:00 AM

Sounds like you were sultan in a harem, Kenny!!!!! Now....don't be naughty, you know so many women will tire you out and that isn't good for your health!!! ;) DO NOT RELIVE THE DREAM!!! I'm worried!!! ONE Feisty woman can be trouble, 28???? Dear dear....;) Betty Boop says....BE GOOD KENNY BOY!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2013 11:12:00 AM

Whatta way to go eh!!! LOL Thank you for your concern dear Eileen but this guy's going to be around for a while yet! Big huggeroonies Miss Boop... love Kenneth! XOXOX

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/15/2013 7:01:00 AM

"Things are always different and changing... The Live Nativity has gone from quiet and relevent to a full blown production! Dragon had the it declared a collection site for the 'Toys for Tots Foundation'. He has his penguins running around the crowds collecting the toys... And he has the Muscular Dystrophy Child spokesperson... playing baby Jesus... Yes! I didn't forget Dragon!... He's now narrating the entire event! And to make it cooler... He gave the Penguins tennis shoes to match his own!"

Carol Eastman
Date: 12/15/2013 8:05:00 AM

We nixed the Penguin dancing in skimpy outfits! Bad Dragon! Bad Dragon! You should be more careful what you suggest... Poor Wee Dragon is So impressionable... LOL.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2013 7:04:00 AM

WOWSERS!!! That mind of yours... LOL XOXOXOXOX

Carol Eastman
Date: 12/15/2013 7:04:00 AM

PS. Don't give Dragon any more ideas... After collecting the toys... He now wants the penguins to dress up as harem and slave girls... to be set free... You should see their skimpy outfits! GROAN!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/15/2013 6:39:00 AM

Ha Ha LOL, this is a terrific and entertaining write about your fantastic dream you had! Maybe I will dream about that tonight...or better yet, I'll dream about my wife!! I know, I'm old fashioned, but that is just the way I am, I love my wife so much that I even want her in my dreams, though I do have to say that 28 beautiful women is awfully appealing! Am glad you enjoyed your dream though my friend, that is awesome! I hope you get to enjoy your next dream just as much! Excellent Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2013 6:46:00 AM

Just a dream dear friend! I, too, love my wife dearly but 28 beautiful women... ??? LOL