Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Holy Cadoodle

Had a wild dream just the other night
Was a ruler of a distant planet
With forty-two slave girls to do my bidding
All gorgeous with naughty habits

Customs were quite a bit different to ours
But one thing remained the same
They liked to snuggle and do naughty things
To say no, would have been insane

So I suffered through this difficult ordeal
And satisfied as many as I could
I was plain tuckered out after twenty-eight
Apologized then collapsed where I stood

Woo Hooo! What an amazing reverie
I'll try to dream it again tonight
Some of those girls had real strange customs
Holy cadoodle, talk about excite!

  

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Donna Jones December 20, 2013 at 11:34 AM Well...maybe the rest got their turn the next go round..you're a hoot! :-) :-) :-) :-) Jack Ellison December 20, 2013 at 12:17 PM Yes... I promised them! They're getting edgy, they can;t wait! LOL Love from hooty Jack xoxoxox

Debbie Guzzi December 15, 2013 at 5:44 PM Yup yup one can dream!! Happy Holidays Light & Love Jack Ellison December 15, 2013 at 5:51 PM WHATTA DREAM! LOL Best wishes for the holiday season, Miss Debbie! LOve and hugs XOXOXOX

Eileen Manassian December 15, 2013 at 8:37 AM Sounds like you were sultan in a harem, Kenny!!!!! Now....don't be naughty, you know so many women will tire you out and that isn't good for your health!!! ;) DO NOT RELIVE THE DREAM!!! I'm worried!!! ONE Feisty woman can be trouble, 28???? Dear dear....;) Betty Boop says....BE GOOD KENNY BOY! Jack Ellison December 15, 2013 at 11:12 AM Whatta way to go eh!!! LOL Thank you for your concern dear Eileen but this guy's going to be around for a while yet! Big huggeroonies Miss Boop... love Kenneth! XOXOX

Carol Eastman December 15, 2013 at 7:01 AM "Things are always different and changing... The Live Nativity has gone from quiet and relevent to a full blown production! Dragon had the it declared a collection site for the 'Toys for Tots Foundation'. He has his penguins running around the crowds collecting the toys... And he has the Muscular Dystrophy Child spokesperson... playing baby Jesus... Yes! I didn't forget Dragon!... He's now narrating the entire event! And to make it cooler... He gave the Penguins tennis shoes to match his own!" Carol Eastman December 15, 2013 at 8:05 AM We nixed the Penguin dancing in skimpy outfits! Bad Dragon! Bad Dragon! You should be more careful what you suggest... Poor Wee Dragon is So impressionable... LOL. Jack Ellison December 15, 2013 at 7:04 AM WOWSERS!!! That mind of yours... LOL XOXOXOXOX Carol Eastman December 15, 2013 at 7:04 AM PS. Don't give Dragon any more ideas... After collecting the toys... He now wants the penguins to dress up as harem and slave girls... to be set free... You should see their skimpy outfits! GROAN!

Russell Sivey December 15, 2013 at 6:39 AM Ha Ha LOL, this is a terrific and entertaining write about your fantastic dream you had! Maybe I will dream about that tonight...or better yet, I'll dream about my wife!! I know, I'm old fashioned, but that is just the way I am, I love my wife so much that I even want her in my dreams, though I do have to say that 28 beautiful women is awfully appealing! Am glad you enjoyed your dream though my friend, that is awesome! I hope you get to enjoy your next dream just as much! Excellent Work!! Jack Ellison December 15, 2013 at 6:46 AM Just a dream dear friend! I, too, love my wife dearly but 28 beautiful women... ??? LOL