Donna Loughman Poet Terza Rima

Holy Art Thou

Son of God
Lord
You are:

Oracle of peace
wise counselor
source within the living waters

That breathes life
into insightful predictions
of our future holdings

Son of Mary
With grace and mercy
one regal descendent of David

A sacrificial birth born
under the shadow of the cross
the Son of the most high

An eternal ruling Monarch
whose loving touch precludes no man
behold our King has come

Immortal spirit of divinity’s
Fulfilling the prophesies
divinely anointing our Prince of Peace

Truth held under Christian virtues
through the portal our great Father
forever speaks within, Amen


unrhymed tercets

A co-written piece by Liam Mcdaid & Donna Loughman

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 30, 2018 at 8:25 PM Hello Donna, this oem is a lovely prayer. Have a nice evening my friend.

James Horn December 28, 2017 at 4:02 PM My Poems Not Fade Away Am blinded by bright light God made, In His son, so I will sit in the shade; And pray, Without delay; My poems away won't let them fade. Jim Horn Donna Loughman December 28, 2017 at 4:20 PM Thank for your prayer.. Have a blessed New Year!

Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2017 at 12:32 PM congratulations donna truly you pen sang in this piece also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments i pray you all have a blessed new year Donna Loughman December 28, 2017 at 1:46 PM Congratulations Liam :-) your pen sang golden as always....I pray you and your family have a wonderful New Year! Donna

Gary Bateman December 28, 2017 at 8:49 AM Hello Donna, I'm back again to wish "Best Congratulations" to you and Liam on receiving the POTD honor here. A perfect poem indeed for this holiday season. Cheers and Best from Ingrid and me!! Gary Donna Loughman December 28, 2017 at 1:44 PM Thank you so much Gary! I hope and pray Ingrid and you have a wonderfully blessed New Year! Donna

Maria Williams December 27, 2017 at 10:59 PM Congratulations on POTD Donna and Liam ....Maria Donna Loughman December 28, 2017 at 8:10 AM Maria, thank you so much for your comment. Joining ink with Liam is always an honor. Wishing you a very blessed New Year! Thank you again:-)

Elizabeth Kinch December 27, 2017 at 1:59 PM Congratulations on POTD. Truly, wonderful write. Amen. Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thank you for your comment and congratulations! God Bless & Happy New Year.Donna:-)

Eve Roper December 27, 2017 at 12:41 PM Well done, Donna & Liam, just beautiful for the holidays or anyday ..Congratulations on POTD hugs eve~`* Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 2:49 PM Hi Eve, thank you so much for your comment and congratulations! Happy New Year! God bless, Donna

Jan Allison December 27, 2017 at 12:38 PM what a lovely collaboration, many congrats on your potd Donna and Liam:-) hugs jan xx Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 2:47 PM Hi Jan, thank you so much for your comment. Writing with Liam is always an honor. Happy New Year-:)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2017 at 12:30 PM - Donna and Liam, congratulations with p.o.t.d. ... well deserved with this beautiful prayer - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 12:36 PM Thank you Ann-Lise your comment is truly appreciated. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas, and wish you a Happy New Year:-) God bless, Donna

Silent One December 27, 2017 at 10:34 AM Congratulations on POTD... Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 11:41 AM Thank you so much Silent One...Thank you for always commenting and giving feedback-:) Praying you have a wonderful New Year! Donna

Charlie Smith December 27, 2017 at 8:31 AM Wonderful prayer and great collaboration, congratulations for POTD honors... Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 11:36 AM Thank you so much! Your comment is greatly appreciated! Happy New Year:-) Donna

Agnes Krampe December 27, 2017 at 7:18 AM Congrats on your POTD, Donna and Liam. Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 8:01 AM Agnes, thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! It is greatly appreciated-:) It is always an honor to write with Liam...Happy New Year!

Vijay Pandit December 27, 2017 at 7:16 AM A lovely spiritual, uplifting poem--congrats Donna and Liam on POTD. Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 7:46 AM Hi Vijay, thank you so much for your comment. It is greatly appreciated. Happy New Year!

Connie Marcum Wong December 27, 2017 at 5:35 AM Donna and Liam, Wow, this is so impressive! These lines just sing inspiration! Congratulations on having this wonderful collaboration honored with POTD! Cheers, Connie : ) Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 7:49 AM Connie, Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! It is always a privilege to join ink with Liam-:) Thank you again and Happy New Year!

Akkina Downing December 27, 2017 at 5:30 AM Congrats Donna on your POTD! Hugs and smiles :) Donna Loughman December 27, 2017 at 7:52 AM Hi Akkina, thank you for your comment! I appreciate it very much! I hope you have a wonderful New Year! Thank you again:-) Donna

Gary Bateman December 26, 2017 at 3:44 PM Hello Dear Donna, A radiant and masterful verse which exudes insightful aspects and realism of all things divine. A Superb Work!! Best Always, Gary Donna Loughman December 26, 2017 at 6:57 PM Gary, thank you so much for your outstanding comment! I appreciate your feedback very much. God bless, Donna.

James Horn December 26, 2017 at 5:40 AM Should see thy shiny sparkly teeth; Dignity way above and not beneath, And always appealing, Standing or kneeling; Ability to write, God did bequeath. Donna Loughman December 26, 2017 at 8:10 AM Thank you so much! I appreciate your very creative response smiling...It’s always an honor to write with Liam......Happy Christmas and New Year! God bless...Donna-:)

Silent One December 26, 2017 at 4:41 AM A lovely poem Donna... Donna Loughman December 26, 2017 at 8:08 AM Thank you Silent one for commenting. I hope you had a lovely Christmas! Happy New Year and God bless...Donna:-)

Liam Mcdaid December 25, 2017 at 3:55 PM your pen sang golden divine donna thank you deeply pal for the pleasure of joining ink bless you Donna Loughman December 25, 2017 at 4:09 PM Liam, Thank you for the honor! Happy Christmas..Donna.

Arturo Michael December 25, 2017 at 3:33 PM A beautiful combination...A lovely piece of poetry, an "Oracle of peace," All the best Donna Donna Loughman December 25, 2017 at 4:14 PM Arturo, thank you kindly for your comment. I appreciate it very much. Happy Christmas:-)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 25, 2017 at 3:30 PM Amen!! Beautiful Words Flow Through Your Pen!...Blessings To You And Yours Donna! Donna Loughman December 25, 2017 at 6:34 PM Vickie, Thank you so much for your comment: Blessings to you! I hope you had a wonderful Christmas with your family too!