Hollywood Failed

Your love used to be
A major motion picture
Made in Hollywood

Now it means nothing
It seems that Hollywood failed
In making a star
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horstkotter Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Great piece.
Pettit Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 4:10 PM
This is a very impressive write, but it is more of a senryu than a haiku.
Michelle Avatar
August 25, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Okay great, thanks for the tip
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:48 PM
A Hollywood star for your haiku poem Juli-Michelle !!! - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
Aderounmu Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Juli-Michelle Hollywood failed? Kindly look up my poem ''Hollywood''. Cheers.
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