Holly

I just read a poem from Holly It didn't seem Really quite jolly But as sociopaths go She seems in the know To judge her, I think would be folly

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/19/2017 5:35:00 PM

Limericks, I do not know. Would like a little longer for this one.

Holly Bohto

Date: 8/12/2017 2:42:00 PM

Holly isn't really jolly when her art is called offensive and a man named Jerry spreads his message that critics will sit on the fence with. LOL.....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2017 3:56:00 PM

I love your poems Holly and it's great Jerry did this poem for you and the final line is superb - folks are too quick to judge and I know from my own experience to be careful using names where folks on soup can think its about them but its so easy to jump to the wrong conclusions :-) keep on posting I'll keep on reading:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2017 2:40:00 PM

I totally agree Jerry I use names in my limericks and try not to use those of soupers but obviously at times there is going to be an overlap. I saw one poem today it is aimed directly at another souper but as no names are used they will get away with the vitriol such childish behaviour from a supposed adult:-( hugs jan xx