Hollow Horror

You left your hollow horror buried deep...
a hollowness unfathomed as we think
about the impact that your strike would reap
and change the path of life in just a blink.

So like a programmed missile, aim precise,
you blazed our Earth with death as you arrived.
For sure, this cataclysm would suffice
to form wide, hollow gaps where life had thrived.

Your wound, six miles deep and nine across
unleashed catastrophe that choked the air.
You spewed its contents, long-term albatross,
that suffocated Earth beyond compare.

Beneath the deepest layers of the Yucatán,
your hollow rests both under land and sea.
Through many million years- new life began...
rebuilt Earth species' timeline, globally.

Through five extinctions, life on Earth was stilled...
   from hollowness to wholeness...emptied...filled.


June 12, 2018

~3rd Place~
Contest: Hollow
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 06/16/2018

The Chicxulub crater is an impact crater buried underneath the Yucatán Peninsula in Mexico. Its center is located near the town of Chicxulub, after which the crater is named.  It caused the fifth extinction of life 66+ million years ago during the time of the Dinosaurs.

Area: 9,826 mi²
Diameter: (93 mi)
Depth: (12 mi)
Impact diameter: (6.2–9.3 mi)
Age: 66.043 ± 0.011 Ma; Cretaceous–Paleogene boundary
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Gentry Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Sandra
Richards Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:59 PM
So much information, and such a different direction! Well done, Sandra!!
Talbot Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Well done Sandra, and thanks for the data too, Congratulations on your podium win. Mick
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Thank you so much, Mick! Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congrats on your podium finish.
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Congrats Sandra on a fine win!
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:56 PM
Thank you so much, John! Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write. Hope you are having a great day. Constance
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra!:-)
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much, Edward. Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 10:28 AM
wonderful write, Sandra,, congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~' *
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Congrats!!! on your win Sandra...love & light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much, ^WW^. Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on a win we'll deserved
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much! Sandra
Sands Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations for your win Sandra :)
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Sandra
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June 16, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Brilliant verse Sandra, congratulations. Tom
Haight Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Sandra
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June 12, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Wow, that is such a cool idea for the "Hollow" poem. Love the personification.
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