Hollow Dream

Last night I had that dream again,
That uneasy dream,
It was almost a nightmare,
For what it may seem,

I had it many times before,
It's always like the last,
A simple room,
Maybe something from the past,

I look inside,
To this mystical place,
Is there something in here,
Inside this empty space,

It's a room from unknown,
But I have been here before,
Perhaps as a child,
As I open the door,

I have to get in,
And finally be free,
What's in this place?
Is there something for me,

I know something's there,
For what I can't see,
That hollow room,
Whatever can it be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Mario. Love, Carol
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February 21, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Thank you Carol much appreciated...
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 10:33 PM
the prize it lingers in the mind, and begs the question if, should i go back one more time, possibility gift... great poem mate well done...
Diletto Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much Don...
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Mario, This is a wonderful poem. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Thank you..
Rozario Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Mario.
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Thank you..
Helbaoui Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:46 AM
A well deserved win. Congratulations, Sami
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Sami...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations Mario a well deserved win xx
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Thank you very much..
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 11:57 PM
Congratulations on your win Mario. This is an impressive piece with simple easy to read wording and suitable rhyming.
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Robert I appreciate that...
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 9:14 PM
congrats Mario on a great wi for this dreamy delight luv..
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February 20, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie Your comments mean a great deal...
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February 19, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Mario.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
Diletto Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:26 PM
Thank you.. The pleasure for entering your contest was all mine...
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Yes,whatever can it be???Tell me.oxox love Anne-Lise
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