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Hollow Dream

Last night I had that dream again, That uneasy dream, It was almost a nightmare, For what it may seem, I had it many times before, It's always like the last, A simple room, Maybe something from the past, I look inside, To this mystical place, Is there something in here, Inside this empty space, It's a room from unknown, But I have been here before, Perhaps as a child, As I open the door, I have to get in, And finally be free, What's in this place? Is there something for me, I know something's there, For what I can't see, That hollow room, Whatever can it be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~P.D.'s~ "The Dreams" contest Mario. Love, Carol
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Mario Diletto
Date: 2/21/2012 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Carol much appreciated...
Date: 2/20/2012 10:33:00 PM
the prize it lingers in the mind, and begs the question if, should i go back one more time, possibility gift... great poem mate well done...
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:14:00 AM
Thank you very much Don...
Date: 2/20/2012 4:24:00 PM
Mario, This is a wonderful poem. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:34:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 2/20/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest Mario.
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:34:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 2/20/2012 11:46:00 AM
A well deserved win. Congratulations, Sami
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Mario Diletto
Date: 2/20/2012 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Sami...
Date: 2/20/2012 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations Mario a well deserved win xx
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:21:00 PM
Thank you very much..
Date: 2/19/2012 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mario. This is an impressive piece with simple easy to read wording and suitable rhyming.
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Mario Diletto
Date: 2/20/2012 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Robert I appreciate that...
Date: 2/19/2012 9:14:00 PM
congrats Mario on a great wi for this dreamy delight luv..
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Mario Diletto
Date: 2/20/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie Your comments mean a great deal...
Date: 2/19/2012 7:46:00 PM
Mario.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Mario Diletto
Date: 2/20/2012 12:26:00 PM
Thank you.. The pleasure for entering your contest was all mine...
Date: 1/28/2012 12:23:00 PM
Yes,whatever can it be???Tell me.oxox love Anne-Lise
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