Hollow Clouds

the roses shrivel
no one to sprinkle water
blue and hollow clouds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/27/2018 10:19:00 PM
It is quite hard on plants here where I am during the summer; with such heat and little rain. Another beautiful haiku Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/28/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 3/22/2018 11:01:00 PM
A haigu returned........................................................... petals shrivel... leaves fall... respite for the roots... fruit gone... long are the winters... ................................................................ Mick
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:31:00 PM
Lovely and vivid imagery of the need for rain, Probir.. Beautifully expressed, dear friend..
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Date: 3/20/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your beautiful words ...
Date: 3/18/2018 8:09:00 AM
- Roses do not need much water - Lovely written, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:20:00 PM
May be in your ever lenient ambience ... here they really look tired ... Anyway, thank you for encouraging, Sunshine ...
Date: 3/18/2018 6:29:00 AM
Hope it rains soon..well painted Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2018 10:18:00 PM
For some it will, for others it won't ... Thank your for the comment ...
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