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Hollow Clouds

the roses shrivel no one to sprinkle water blue and hollow clouds

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Fj Thomas

Date: 3/27/2018 10:19:00 PM

It is quite hard on plants here where I am during the summer; with such heat and little rain. Another beautiful haiku Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/28/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much ...

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/22/2018 11:01:00 PM

A haigu returned........................................................... petals shrivel... leaves fall... respite for the roots... fruit gone... long are the winters... ................................................................ Mick

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/19/2018 8:31:00 PM

Lovely and vivid imagery of the need for rain, Probir.. Beautifully expressed, dear friend..

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2018 10:50:00 AM

Thank you, Susan for your beautiful words ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2018 8:09:00 AM

- Roses do not need much water - Lovely written, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2018 10:20:00 PM

May be in your ever lenient ambience ... here they really look tired ... Anyway, thank you for encouraging, Sunshine ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2018 6:29:00 AM

Hope it rains soon..well painted Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/18/2018 10:18:00 PM

For some it will, for others it won't ... Thank your for the comment ...