Collum Lune, a kind of Haiku that has word count 3/5/3. A hollow is like a valley. I live on the side of a hill with a creek at the bottom and we get creek rise a lot or fog in low places.
shrouded foggy hollow clear rising sun peeks through.... the wild calls
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Collum Lune, a kind of Haiku that has word count 3/5/3. A hollow is like a valley. I live on the side of a hill with a creek at the bottom and we get creek rise a lot or fog in low places.