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Holiday's Past Reveries

As Christmas beckons with season of cheer I recall how we met, a hallway outside Year Nineteen-Eighty in a film's premiere; Offering your neck- scarf, we gently smiled. Flurries drifted while in haste I agreed, Invite for tea as we watched the moon fade 'Till season’s next, nuptial joy pealed At 25, a mistletoe crocheted. Tonight, the lights reflect your willow eyes Bestowing grace from Magi stars above Flashback of theme songs yearns for unity; Enduring a year of departed love. The holidays cloak time; you hum my name From spring's past budding to December’s snow, Alone, I toast reveries etched on life’s acclaim Kisses missed from my long- gone mistletoe. Kelly Deschler's Christmas Past, Present or Future ~based on my aunt's experience 1/03/2015

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Date: 1/11/2015 10:02:00 PM
Nette,, Congratulations on your Christmas Daze win, Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:52:00 PM
Written SO beautifully in your own elegant, signature style with a feel of nostalgia mixed with melancholy at the end...Gonna be pondering line one of verse # 3 for a while...BIG congrats my friend! - Tim
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:19:00 AM
A wonderful one,congrats on the win nette...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:29:00 PM
Last verse a fav! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations, nette on your first place win.
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved top win Nette
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:19:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your well-deserved top-place win for your lovely poem. Such a romantic story you've shared with us, and what a wonderful memory for you! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2015 5:58:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 5:52:00 PM
This was a lovely recalling of a romantic Christmas memory... Congratulations on your first place win! Beautifully written, nette!
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Date: 1/7/2015 6:55:00 AM
What a beautiful story; full of fresh love, romance and a touch of melancholy at the end.
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:22:00 AM
this holds one's attention,,,I'm sure Kelly will love it...
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Date: 1/6/2015 7:05:00 AM
a great poem Nette you always capture the theme well hugs
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Date: 1/5/2015 6:26:00 AM
I was deeply touched by the way this remarkable poem ended. Sad and yet beguiling. Hope your aunt is always filled with beautiful memories, Nette.
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Date: 1/4/2015 11:18:00 AM
What a sweet lovely write for your auntie nett...sure to please the judge as well..:-) happy new year!
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:07:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem written about your aunt's experience, Nette! Funny, I as I was reading, I was thinking that there's no way your old enough to have had a date in 1980...I hope your aunt enjoyed this as much as I did...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:21:00 PM
Happy New Year Nette.. Excellently written piece. A pleasure to read my friend... A7
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:17:00 PM
I guess beautiful is the word nette....love it...huggs
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:49:00 PM
so beautifully penned Nette with such vivid imagery good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:18:00 PM
A beautifully penned memory and good luck.
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