Holiday Within My Mind

Once I took a holiday within my mind. I saw spectacular vistas and lovely hidden places as I walked across the clouds. 

I continued on amid the cerulean, cotton candy billows and retraced ginger steps of trepidation. 

I tiptoed the dark corridor where colorful memories of our first encounter lay sleeping. 

Careful not to wake them from their peaceful slumber I stood quietly for a moment in reverent remembrance. 

I then moved on toward a field of stargazer lilies that represented the many adventures we shared. 

As I glanced skyward, a heavenly body cast its glow upon a trellis bed of blushing red morning glories and my mind bent to pluck that memory. 

As I moved on with my prize held close to my heart I strolled along a tangerine rock candy path through a forest of days gone by, yet there was no melancholy, only splendid bliss. 

As I clutched these bliss filled memories, into a sandy clearing I roamed. 

A Tahitian breeze whispered like a warm baby's breath implored me to hold these feelings forever. 

A seashell's joyful tears wept beaches of rare pearls that now traverse the landscape of my mind creating the perfect place to get away and dream of better things.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/4/2018 3:33:00 PM
Well done, Rhoda and Edward for this lovely collaboration. Superb imagination:) Regards // paul
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 2/4/2018 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. You're wonderful
Date: 12/10/2017 11:23:00 AM
A tremendous collaboration and enjoyable journey of thought.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/10/2017 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Richard. We appreciate your kind comment
Date: 12/9/2017 10:27:00 AM
Great job Rhoda and Edward! This turned out wonderful. You two are an excellent team of poets.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/9/2017 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, James, for taking the time to read and for your support.
Date: 12/9/2017 8:12:00 AM
A wonderful collab Rhoda and Eddie...god bless and happy holidays my friends...^WW^
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/9/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, Winged. Blessings and happy holidays to you as well
Date: 12/9/2017 8:01:00 AM
May all your dreams be real...if it's from the heart it must be true... All the best Rhoda
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/9/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo
Date: 12/8/2017 8:22:00 PM
Well done..Rhoda and Edward.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/8/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Dear!
Date: 12/8/2017 6:54:00 PM
A beautiful reverie, nicely done. John
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/8/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for taking the time to read and leave words of kindness and encouragement.
Date: 12/8/2017 6:13:00 PM
This is beautiful..Great collaboration Rhoda and Edward
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/8/2017 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. Thank you for stopping by to read. Much appreciated.
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